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Forest of doom

forest of doom

by blue wings

Title: forest of doom
Author: blue wings
Email: stargategirl0135@yahoo.com
Category: Action/Adventure, Humor, Romance
Pairing: Sam/Jack, Sam/Teal'c
Season: any
Rating: G
Content Warnings: none
Status: Completed
Summary: teal'c sam kidnapped,jack worried...
Disclaimer: Stargate SG-1 and its characters are the property of Showtime/Viacom, MGM/UA, Double Secret Productions, and Gekko Productions. We have written this story for entertainment purposes only and no money whatsoever has exchanged hands. No copyright infringement is intended. The original characters, situations, and story are the property of the authors. Not to be archived without permission of the authors.
Author's notes: it's just funny b/c of it's stupidity...
first fic so plz be nice,all coments are welcome

( briefing room )

Sam: telling from the information we gathered from the probe we sent thru to p3x-469 the weather is chilly , life form none.

Jack: so when are we going to go?

Sam: general?

Hammond: how soon can you get ready?

(stargate)

technician: chevron 7 is locked in place.

Jack: after you carter.

( p3x-469 )

jack: carter you said chilly .

carter :I didn't the probe did.

Jack : ya whatever . here comes Daniel and tealc .

Daniel: carter?

Carter: what?

Daniel: you said it was chilly.

Carter: the probe did for pete sakes.

Jack: lets go look at what's on the other side of that hill..

Jack: tealc wait up. That's an order.

(on the hill about ½ way up)

tealc: I think we should set up camp O'Neil

jack : ok . Daniel?

Daniel: what?

Jack: where are the tents?

Daniel: I got them .

Jack: tealc keep an eye out .

Tealc: bows head slightly .

(at the campfire)

Carter: sir why do you think this planet is uninhabited?

Jack: cause no one has explored it yet and because its cold not chilly.

Tealc: smiles.



( later )

jack: who's gonna keep first watch?

Daniel: I will.



( about midnight)

jack wakes up and sees a light not too far away supposes Daniel started a fire to keep warm while keeping watch. then he goes back to sleep a few minutes later Daniel is whispering jack jack?

Jack: what danny boy?

Daniel: someone's coming with a torch sounds like a lot of footsteps.

Jack: get everyone up.

( few minutes later)

carter: it's the jaffa sir.

Jack : everyone run .

Jack: carter duck .

She does and misses a shot .

Carter: thanks .

Tealc is shot down and is taken prisoner.

Jack: split up .

Carter is shot down and taken prisoner.

Jack: CARTER!!!

( 4 in the morning)

Daniel: whew that was close .

Jack: na really ?

Daniel: what do you think they will do to them?

Jack: I don't know I don't want carter to get killed.

Daniel: do you like her?

Jack: so what if I do Daniel?

Daniel: well its against sgc regulations to be in love with you c/o.

Jack: you think I don't know that ?

Daniel: lets get to the stargate .

( on the other side of that hill)

jaffa guard: your hinus the prisoners are ready.

Hathor: bring them in .

( when there in )

hathor: tealc you will pay for betraying the Gould

and you ( carter ) you are the only life form to ever survive an unblending ?

carter: yes

hathor : what is your name?

Carter: says nothing

Hathor : hits her hard

Carter: carter

Hathor: take them away



Carter is thrown down into a chamber and tealc is chained up and hathor makes contact with apophis .

( when hath. And apop.. are talking)

hathor: so do you still have earths address??

Apophis: yes. But what do you have in return??

Hathor: bring him in .

Guard throws tealc down after beating him when he was tied up.

Apophis : smiles and says : when shall we trade?

Hathor : let me get him ( tealc) ready.in 1 hour .

( hour later on the screen)

apophis :send the choffa over .

hathor: sent him over

apophis:leaves

hathor : screams and goes after him and destroys his ship and the shuttle pod that leaves it.

Carter: looks out the window in her chamber and cries that tealc is gone.but she sees something hathor didn't another pod .she prays tealc is on it even if it was with apophis.

Jack : takes his pistol and quietly shoots down a jaffa and takes his weapon .lets go to the stargate .

Daniel:what about carter?

Jack : says nothing

They make it to the stargate and get home and tell general about it and ask if sg2 can come through on a rescue

Gen.,ham.: no im not risking anymore people .



On the planet

The pod carter say came up to the window and someone walks out tealc she wispers crying so relieved .

Tealc bust the window open and gets carter out get in the pod and takes off . shoots a few jaffa and lands in front of the stargate and goes home when talking to hammond they decide to send a tactical nuclear warhead through they do and destroy the planet .

Carter and tealc are talking and she said she say 3 pods leave 1 was destroyed 1 was you and 1 had left to another planet.



Please send feedback im in a contest with my sister who gets the best feedback I know its horrible but please at stargategirl0135@yahoo.com or bluewings151@ hotmail.com

Thanks 4 readin it by, bluewings151theres probably going to be a sequel /who was in the pod that got blown up?who was in the pod that went to the nearest planet?

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