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Reviews For Major O'Neill and Colonel Carter
Name: me3 (Anonymous) · Datum: 2008.03.05 19:13 · Für: Major O'Neill and Colonel Carter
good stuff! well written!
maybe you could update and add to what happened with more descriptions and reactions to their new bodies to "flesh out" the story a bit more, and updated the story to include recent changes (Janet's death, etc) but otherwise excellent. (I realize the story was written a while back but things have changed since then.) You captured their voices well!
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