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Have A Cry by GenJacksGirl

Rated: AO • 42 Reviews starstarstarstarstar
Summary: Sam's plane goes down, and everyone is forced to deal with the aftermath.
Reviewer: PaulineFitz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 2011.10.28 Title: Chapter 6: Fantasy

Still waiting for the next chapter, I just thought I would check in to see if you had updated.  Please, Please don't leave us in the lurch.  It is such a good story.



Picking up the pieces by nyaa

Rated: MA • 33 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star
Summary: What if Jack and Sam were in a relationship before he was stranded on Edora
Reviewer: PaulineFitz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 2009.08.02 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Another Good chapter, I really like the way you are depicting Sam, that is how normal women would react, Not like TPTB wrote it. Can't wait to see how he defends himself. And will she forgive him? (I would only have to look into his brown eyes) we shall see. Look forward to next update.



The Shock Of a Lifetime by Emmauk26

Rated: AO • 11 Reviews starstarstarstarhalf-star
Summary:

When a seemingly normal mission goes badly wrong things don't look good for Jack and Sam.


Reviewer: PaulineFitz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 2009.07.25 Title: Chapter 2: Part 2.

Glad I found this one. Excellent, really enjoyed it, Thank you

Author's Response: Glad to see that you enjoyed reading my story and thank you very much for your reveiw; I have a second story uploaded now, why not check it out you may enjoy that one also.  :-D



I Nearly Lost You. by Emmauk26

Rated: AO • 12 Reviews starstarstarstarstar
Summary: Jack comes close to losing Sam on a mission, but will it make him tell her how he feels or will Pete get in the way?
Reviewer: PaulineFitz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 2009.07.23 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yes! I enjoyed the first chapter very much, it looks like this story is going to have everything. Look forward to yhe next update.

Author's Response: Thank you very much i'm glad that you enjoyed the first chapter and hope that you continue to enjoy the rest of the story.



Reviewer: PaulineFitz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 2009.07.31 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I love this story, the sooner you get rid of spud head the better though. Look forward to your next update.

Author's Response: Lol i like your name for Pete, maybe i'll call him that in my next story, with your permission of course,  :-D thanks for the great reveiw; i'll be updating it on Sunday, hope you enjoy the next chapter. 



Reviewer: PaulineFitz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 2009.07.25 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Another very good chapter, I think you write very well and I am looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Thank you very much, i hope you find the next chapter to be as good.



The Legacy by ziva

Rated: MA • 2 Reviews starstarstarstarstar
Summary: Some gifts are worth much more than anything money can buy.
Reviewer: PaulineFitz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 2009.10.02 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hi Ziva

 Welcome to this site. Your story was great, very angsty, made me want to cry. Lovely ending.



Our Baby by ziva

Rated: MA • 2 Reviews starstarstarstarstar
Summary: When Jack decides to makes some drastic changes in his life, he never imagines where it will lead.
Reviewer: PaulineFitz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 2009.11.18 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hi Z nice to have you back, and with such an unusual chapter I thoroughly enjoyed reading it and I am really looking forward to see where you are going with this.



Everything To Lose by ziva, PaulineFitz

Rated: AO • 1 Reviews starstarstarstarstar
Summary: Sam discovers that her career is not enough.
Reviewer: PaulineFitz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 2012.07.30 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

You did a great job with just an out-line of a story. Thanks P.

Author's Response: You must be very bored to be reading these old stories.  Poor you!  But you know how much I love hearing from you, even when it's just a tiny review.  So, thank you! xo



Captain Jack and the Lady Adelaide by ziva

Rated: AO • 32 Reviews starstarstarstarstar
Summary: Captain Jack, ex-Navy SEAL, joins forces once again with Sam Carter, Doctor of Marine Biology.
Reviewer: PaulineFitz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 2011.11.06 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

That  chapter was fantastical and I loved it before and I loved it now.  Well done Z. roll on the next one, will discuss that one with you.   

Author's Response: I am amazed by all the reviews this story has gotten!  It is wonderful to hear from the readers, especially now when I'm feeling rather low. You may have noticed a few nice comments about the stories you and I have worked on together.  I think you should write something on your own.  Maybe just one page, a stream of consciousness sort of piece from Sam's point of view.  I would be happy to Beta it for you. Thanx again for all your help and encouragement.  You are the best!  xoxoxo 



Reviewer: PaulineFitz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 2011.11.05 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Another excellent chapter. no matter how many times I read it I still thoroughly enjoy.  Thank you.

Author's Response:

Thank you for everything you have done for me as a proofreader and a critic, and for all the encouragement you have given me too.  And thank you for coming up with yet another great plot. I can't wait to see what you have added to your original story line for story 3 in the Captain Jack series. I know it will be wonderful. You are the bestest!  XO, ziva   



Reviewer: PaulineFitz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 2011.11.04 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

So good to have you back Z.  Me thinks that you may have added to this chapter, you and your editing LOL Excellent as usual, I do love Captain Jack.



Reviewer: PaulineFitz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 2011.10.12 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I am so pleased that your readers are finding you, this story is too good to miss.  Hope you are feeling a bit better.  Great series. No little characters though LOL



Reviewer: PaulineFitz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 2011.10.10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hooray for Heliopolis ! We get your newest story, and what a good yarn it is.  I love this Jack and Sam and I hope that your readers get to read  and review it here.  Look forward to the next chapter.



Nation's Reward by Adelie King

Rated: AO • 6 Reviews starstarstarstarstar
Summary:

To thank them for everything they’ve done for the country and the planet Dr. Elizabeth Weir has President Hayes grant Brigadier General Jack O’Neill and Lieutenant Colonel Samantha Carter their most dearest wish.


Reviewer: PaulineFitz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 2011.10.31 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: The Next Day

That was sooo good, enjoying this very much, til tomorrow then !

Author's Response: Yep and next chapter will make you melt. Chapter 5 I have to write two versions one cut for fanfiction.net and the uncut version. So it might be delayed a day for one site or the other.



Reviewer: PaulineFitz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 2011.10.30 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Question

Well done Adelie, at last a new S&J. Hope the ball starts rolling now.  Enjoyed this chapter very much look forward to the next. And seeing the water colours.

Author's Response: Thanks and the next chapter will be up today



Reviewer: PaulineFitz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 2011.11.01 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Nerves

Excellent, you are on form.  really looking forward to the next chapter, I can wait a couple of days. 

Author's Response: Thanks



Jacob Carter's Last Wish by Adelie King

Rated: AO • 13 Reviews starstarstarstarstar
Summary: Jacob Carter is dying of cancer and wishes Sam married before he dies and she has only one suitor she could can possibly marry but the military won't allow it (takes place 2nd Season during "The Tokra")
Reviewer: PaulineFitz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 2011.11.03 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Dying Request

This is going to be amusing, can't wait for Jack to find out.Glad that you decided to post it.

Author's Response: Thanks I have to tone down these hot scenes for fanfiction.net as well.



Reviewer: PaulineFitz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 2011.11.04 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: What?!

Very humourous, looking good.

Author's Response: Thanks Jack's reaction was realistic I thought.



Captain Jack and the Bermuda Triangle by ziva, PaulineFitz

Rated: AO • 16 Reviews starstarstarstarstar
Summary: Captain Jack and Doctor Carter are back together again, and this time they are searching for a treasure that has been lost since WWII.
Reviewer: PaulineFitz Signed
Date: 2011.11.28 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hi Schatze, have to respond this way, can't get in. Thank you for reviewing and yes! the nasty Samuels has gone to meet his maker.  Glad that you came over !



Getting Him Good by Adelie King

Rated: AO • 6 Reviews starstarstarstarstar
Summary: Jack, and Daniel decide to pick on Sam and she gets back at them good but not in the same way. WARNING VERY GRAPHIC SEX AND LANGUAGE!!!! SOME SCENES MAY SEEM NON-CONSENT TO SOME
Reviewer: PaulineFitz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 2011.11.29 Title: Chapter 1: Getting Him Good

Well that sure heated up the rather cold day here ! Keep posting Adelie, we need you.

Author's Response: Thank you we're all needed for the same purposes



Unlocked Doors by Merkaba

Rated: 13+ • 7 Reviews starstarstarstarstar
Summary: Episode Tag to Divide and Conquer. I always thought Jack and Sam 'leaving it in the room' was way to convenient and unrealistic for such a pivotal time in their lives. This is my version of what might have happened. Jack/Sam focused
Reviewer: PaulineFitz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 2012.01.04 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Second Thoughts

Love your stories Merkaba, glad that you are posting here.

Author's Response: Thank you for the kind words!  Nice to 'see' a familier face.  I really miss the Sam and Jack site.  It was like a community.  I hope that Siler turns up and is OK.  Thank you for the welcome!



Reviewer: PaulineFitz Signed
Date: 2012.01.05 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Answers

Nice Ending enjoyed it very much, I prefer reading on this site.  Yes I miss the S&J site very much, lets hope that Siler is OK.  Have to try and make this site our community now.  Have a co-author story coming here very soon.  can't let S&J finish.

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed how it ended.  Thank you for the review!  I will look forward to seeing your story.  I always enjoy your writing.



Captain Jack and the Guardian of the Deep by ziva, PaulineFitz

Rated: AO • 11 Reviews starstarstarstarstar
Summary:

Jack and Sam team up together to search for treasure and maybe for another reason.

AN:  Sorry for the delay folks, but RL got the better of us for a while.

***This story is dedicated to a great man, a wonderful husband and a good father, Arthur Fitzsimmons. He willl be sorely missed.


Reviewer: PaulineFitz Signed
Date: 2012.01.19 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Hi Everyone. The site stops me answering direct, but I just wish to say, thankyou to all who read and reviewed.  Life hasn't been kind to either Ziva or myself lately.  But if you guys want another Captain Jack, just say and we will do our best.



When In Rome by ziva

Rated: AO • 4 Reviews starstarstarstarstar
Summary:

It's a time travel story I wrote back in 2007, folks. I hope you enjoy it.

AN: When the site crashed it took the first 13 chapters of this story with it. Sorry you had to wait so long to read them. All chapters are posted now.  What I want to know is, is Heliopolis going away or not? WTF is going on around here? 


Reviewer: PaulineFitz Signed
Date: 2012.02.02 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This story appears to have crashed due to whatever is going on with this site.  It can be read on SamandJack.net  along with the other Ziva stories.