Still waiting for the next chapter, I just thought I would check in to see if you had updated. Please, Please don't leave us in the lurch. It is such a good story.
Another Good chapter, I really like the way you are depicting Sam, that is how normal women would react, Not like TPTB wrote it. Can't wait to see how he defends himself. And will she forgive him? (I would only have to look into his brown eyes) we shall see. Look forward to next update.
When a seemingly normal mission goes badly wrong things don't look good for Jack and Sam.
Glad I found this one. Excellent, really enjoyed it, Thank you
Author's Response: Glad to see that you enjoyed reading my story and thank you very much for your reveiw; I have a second story uploaded now, why not check it out you may enjoy that one also. :-D
Yes! I enjoyed the first chapter very much, it looks like this story is going to have everything. Look forward to yhe next update.
Author's Response: Thank you very much i'm glad that you enjoyed the first chapter and hope that you continue to enjoy the rest of the story.
I love this story, the sooner you get rid of spud head the better though. Look forward to your next update.
Author's Response: Lol i like your name for Pete, maybe i'll call him that in my next story, with your permission of course, :-D thanks for the great reveiw; i'll be updating it on Sunday, hope you enjoy the next chapter.
Another very good chapter, I think you write very well and I am looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thank you very much, i hope you find the next chapter to be as good.
Welcome to this site. Your story was great, very angsty, made me want to cry. Lovely ending.
Hi Z nice to have you back, and with such an unusual chapter I thoroughly enjoyed reading it and I am really looking forward to see where you are going with this.
You did a great job with just an out-line of a story. Thanks P.
Author's Response: You must be very bored to be reading these old stories. Poor you! But you know how much I love hearing from you, even when it's just a tiny review. So, thank you! xo
That chapter was fantastical and I loved it before and I loved it now. Well done Z. roll on the next one, will discuss that one with you.
Author's Response: I am amazed by all the reviews this story has gotten! It is wonderful to hear from the readers, especially now when I'm feeling rather low. You may have noticed a few nice comments about the stories you and I have worked on together. I think you should write something on your own. Maybe just one page, a stream of consciousness sort of piece from Sam's point of view. I would be happy to Beta it for you. Thanx again for all your help and encouragement. You are the best! xoxoxo
Another excellent chapter. no matter how many times I read it I still thoroughly enjoy. Thank you.
Thank you for everything you have done for me as a proofreader and a critic, and for all the encouragement you have given me too. And thank you for coming up with yet another great plot. I can't wait to see what you have added to your original story line for story 3 in the Captain Jack series. I know it will be wonderful. You are the bestest! XO, ziva
So good to have you back Z. Me thinks that you may have added to this chapter, you and your editing LOL Excellent as usual, I do love Captain Jack.
I am so pleased that your readers are finding you, this story is too good to miss. Hope you are feeling a bit better. Great series. No little characters though LOL
Hooray for Heliopolis ! We get your newest story, and what a good yarn it is. I love this Jack and Sam and I hope that your readers get to read and review it here. Look forward to the next chapter.
To thank them for everything they’ve done for the country and the planet Dr. Elizabeth Weir has President Hayes grant Brigadier General Jack O’Neill and Lieutenant Colonel Samantha Carter their most dearest wish.
That was sooo good, enjoying this very much, til tomorrow then !
Author's Response: Yep and next chapter will make you melt. Chapter 5 I have to write two versions one cut for fanfiction.net and the uncut version. So it might be delayed a day for one site or the other.
Well done Adelie, at last a new S&J. Hope the ball starts rolling now. Enjoyed this chapter very much look forward to the next. And seeing the water colours.
Author's Response: Thanks and the next chapter will be up today
Excellent, you are on form. really looking forward to the next chapter, I can wait a couple of days.
Author's Response: Thanks
This is going to be amusing, can't wait for Jack to find out.Glad that you decided to post it.
Author's Response: Thanks I have to tone down these hot scenes for fanfiction.net as well.
Very humourous, looking good.
Author's Response: Thanks Jack's reaction was realistic I thought.
Hi Schatze, have to respond this way, can't get in. Thank you for reviewing and yes! the nasty Samuels has gone to meet his maker. Glad that you came over !
Well that sure heated up the rather cold day here ! Keep posting Adelie, we need you.
Author's Response: Thank you we're all needed for the same purposes
Love your stories Merkaba, glad that you are posting here.
Author's Response: Thank you for the kind words! Nice to 'see' a familier face. I really miss the Sam and Jack site. It was like a community. I hope that Siler turns up and is OK. Thank you for the welcome!
Nice Ending enjoyed it very much, I prefer reading on this site. Yes I miss the S&J site very much, lets hope that Siler is OK. Have to try and make this site our community now. Have a co-author story coming here very soon. can't let S&J finish.
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed how it ended. Thank you for the review! I will look forward to seeing your story. I always enjoy your writing.
Jack and Sam team up together to search for treasure and maybe for another reason.
AN: Sorry for the delay folks, but RL got the better of us for a while.
***This story is dedicated to a great man, a wonderful husband and a good father, Arthur Fitzsimmons. He willl be sorely missed.
Hi Everyone. The site stops me answering direct, but I just wish to say, thankyou to all who read and reviewed. Life hasn't been kind to either Ziva or myself lately. But if you guys want another Captain Jack, just say and we will do our best.
It's a time travel story I wrote back in 2007, folks. I hope you enjoy it.
AN: When the site crashed it took the first 13 chapters of this story with it. Sorry you had to wait so long to read them. All chapters are posted now. What I want to know is, is Heliopolis going away or not? WTF is going on around here?
This story appears to have crashed due to whatever is going on with this site. It can be read on SamandJack.net along with the other Ziva stories.