You know. i've been chcking back here for a year or so waiting for you to continue. and finally you do. But frankly, you need to stop with this one chapter posting and then disappearing. i had to reread the whole story. yuou're lucky i like this story. good job though. and welcome back.
Now that's a tease. Should have let her get fucked. What a shame. Sexy whore like that not even getting a good tit fuck.
Curious ;)) -licks her cheek- From you know who ;)
So when are you gunna finish?
Author's Response: I'm very sorry readers. It will be a few months before I can continue. My computer has been destroyed. But hopefully I'll be getting a new computer and can continue this little saga.
I know who the goauld is. you thought you were gunna be tricky didn't you? lol. its obvious its hathor! just kidding. but i'll keep it ot myself so others can speculate.
Author's Response: The response is finally working. I'm going to get another chapter posted here pretty soon. And how did you know it was Hathor? Heh. Ok, Yeah. I know. I'm tired. But anyway. Enjoy the next chapter, oh faithful reader and reviewer!
finally you continued. But this chap was kinda short. but how did the gould figure out they were there? i hope there's a good twist to the gould part though cuz i think it's overdone in sg-1 thats why they brought in the new enemy aliens and crap
short, but that definitely more like it!
more!
that talkon is an a$$hole. i wouldn't mind killing the guy myself
Um, wow. That's the first mildly threatening review I've gotten. But anyway. Don't worry about Sam. And the story isn't about to have a depressing ending. Also, I am slightly offended that anyone would try to hamper my artistic expression. But yeah, no hard feelings I guess. It's a suggestion I suppose and I'll take it as that.
please don't have Sam raped. You've already stretched myboundaries, but if you have Sam raped as well I won't read anymore
i first chapters a while ago so i didn't remember at first. but i do now. but i don't even know if this review will work, the thingy said it's down. but i like it. kudos!
Hi, this is great story.When will continuation?
so, who gets raped? I hope neither Ket nor Sam and I hope the team and Ket get away before anything bad happens.
So, Ket is supposed to take a mate... Well, Jack seems to fit her just well.
Wait, so how were they connected with earth and how did a goauld fall in love with anything? i mean, i guess it's possible, but yeah, and what's up with all the possibilities. I mean one minute it looks like ket is gunna go for daniel then the next time she's flirting with jack. but i still think its gunna be jack. and that's messed up that the queen let the wolves in there like that. ok, sorry, i'm getting a little too into this
oh wow,s o she likes the strong types. at first i thought she was gunna go for daniel, but now that i read the rest, i think she's gunna end up going for jack. i mean he's right up her ally. but then who's ggoing to get together with daniel? i guess i have to wait for that
i liked that. how you had the pickpocket be the vigilante. but i liked it even more when they found out it was a beautiful women. what did she do with the ammo though? i mean, was there a point to that? or did she just take it because she thought it was interesting. i mean, maybe she thought it would sell for a lot of money or something. i don't know. just speculating here.
Wow, werewolves huh? That's an interesting twist. I don't think they've done too much about that in the show. And is it just me or is this a little fantasy of yours, seeing how the girl in the story is keturah dedan and your pen name is the same? Just a question. But I think it's great, I mean, I'm actually interested in what happened with the people of Kam, and and who is this girl gunna hook up with? Jack? But daniel was sort of eying her too, so i don't know. but i like the idea of jack and ket, but I have a feeling you're leaning that way. that is, unless she hooks up with both? lol. no i'm sure you have something planned for all this, can't wait till the next chapter.
Ok, I'm only writing this because the server is not letting me respond to the last review. So here's my response. Thanks for the correction about Jack's eyes. I haven't watched SG-1 in nearly two years because I can't afford cable. Lol. So I'm a little rusty here. But I love the show now as much as ever. *huggles*
so, she goes after alpha males...Jack's n alpha male... Sam can attest to that since she tried to seduce him to "give her the strongest offspring"
So, this is supposedly a Jack/Other fic. Will that Other be Keturah or some other female?
Btw., Jack doesn't have blue eyes, his eyes are brown.
good job otherwise, please update soon!
Wow, it's the first story I read on here since I joined, but I like it a lot. I can't wait to see what you have planned. Or maybe you're just winging it, which is even better. It shows you can thing on your toes! I might add, it's very sexy so far. But of course, I'm a guy so most anything gets me going.
loved the start, who will Jack hook up with and will the fic end with them still together?
Excellent start.