Name: Awishaway (Anonymous) · Datum: 2011.11.13 10:50 · Für: Chapter 1
Happy to be up and reading your stories again sad our other site is gone but we can't have everything. love it so far.

Name: Patricia (Anonymous) · Datum: 2011.11.06 19:14 · Für: Chapter 6
Great story! Can't wait for the next story!

Author's Response: Thank you for letting me know that you liked it.  The next story is in the works, but I have no idea when it will be completed.  Pauline and I will do our best not to keep you waiting for very long.

Name: steadfast (Anonymous) · Datum: 2011.11.06 14:39 · Für: Chapter 6
Great story!  I don't usually go for stories that are in non-stargate universes, but these Captain Jack stories are great.  Sort of takes me back to Gardner McKay and "Adventures in Paradise."  So glad you are back.  Thanks.

Author's Response:

Holy coincidence, Batman!  I was just telling someone about Gardner McKay and "Adventures In Paradise" the other day. They had never heard of it, probably because they are much younger than me. I loved that show! Watching it made me want to run away from home and go to the South Pacific, particularly Tahiti.  I still haven't been there.  Have you? 

I'm really glad you enjoyed the first two Captain Jack stories.  They were my concoction, but the third one is a plot dreamed up by Pauline Fitzsimmons, my Beta and fellow RDA worshipper.  

It is good to be home from the hospital, but I still have no firm diagnosis and therefore no prognosis. It is very frustrating when doctors just shake their heads in confusion. But I'm tough, and I plan to overcome whatever is wrong with me.

Thank YOU for reading my stories and for letting me know you liked them.  Reviews are priceless, so please continue.  :)

Name: Adelie King (Signed) · Datum: 2011.11.06 13:27 · Für: Chapter 6
Good job Ziva can't wait for the next installment

Author's Response: Thanx, I'm glad you liked it.  Pauline has given me a good plot for the 3rd story in the Captain Jack series, but I've been sick and haven't been able to work on filling in the details. I think it's the pain meds that are making me feel sleepy all the time. Anyway, I can tell you this; the story involves a Nazi General and a missing airplane.  I hope to begin working on the story this week.   

Name: Lynn (Anonymous) · Datum: 2011.11.06 09:03 · Für: Chapter 5

I will say it again...OH NO!  Is Sam really going to leave Captain Jack again? Please say it ain't so :(

Name: Lynn (Anonymous) · Datum: 2011.11.06 08:58 · Für: Chapter 4
Oh No!  What did you just do to poor Jack?  I should have been more prepared that angst was headed their way, but was so enjoying their time together.

Name: Lynn (Anonymous) · Datum: 2011.11.06 08:53 · Für: Chapter 3
So happy to see you back in action, as you were really missed.  I think I will need something cold to drink after this one, and am really looking forward to more :)

Name: samcarter (Signed) · Datum: 2011.11.06 08:02 · Für: Chapter 6
Great ending loved it. I hope you make a full recovery soon  Ziva. And looking forward to more of your stories and the ones you write with Pauline also.

Author's Response: Thank you very much!  I will tell Pauline what you said.  She still thinks of herself as a poor writer, and I keep telling her what a genius she is when it comes to original plots.  One day I would love to see her write a story all on her own. 

Name: samcarter (Signed) · Datum: 2011.11.06 07:57 · Für: Chapter 5
where are the emoticons when you need them?!?  There is so much i want to say

Author's Response:

Thanx for the five star rating!  I was worried you wouldn't like it, particularly the ending.  I know Jack and Sam parted ways, but they will get back together in the next story in the series.  And who knows what troubles they will have, and what treasure they will find. 

I am eager to get back to writing the next story, but lately the medications I am taking are preventing me from concentrating. I am also having trouble writing responses to the reviews.  I nod off quite easily, so please be patient while I get off these darned drugs.  While I am recuperating, Pauline is busy working on the next story.  So hang in there and we'll be back.  hugs, ziva

Name: PaulineFitz (Signed) · Datum: 2011.11.06 07:49 · Für: Chapter 6
That  chapter was fantastical and I loved it before and I loved it now.  Well done Z. roll on the next one, will discuss that one with you.   

Author's Response: I am amazed by all the reviews this story has gotten!  It is wonderful to hear from the readers, especially now when I'm feeling rather low. You may have noticed a few nice comments about the stories you and I have worked on together.  I think you should write something on your own.  Maybe just one page, a stream of consciousness sort of piece from Sam's point of view.  I would be happy to Beta it for you. Thanx again for all your help and encouragement.  You are the best!  xoxoxo 

Name: Pamdill (Anonymous) · Datum: 2011.11.06 01:10 · Für: Chapter 5
Glad you are back. I am really enjoying this series.

Author's Response: Reviews are the only reward we fan fiction writers get for all the time we spend writing and posting our stories. So, THANK YOU for reviewing!  hugs, ziva

Name: Patricia (Anonymous) · Datum: 2011.11.05 22:10 · Für: Chapter 1
Another great story Ziva. Can't wait to read the rest...these two need to get over their misgivings and just be together!

Author's Response:

Thank you!  I am so glad you are enjoying my Captain Jack series, even if Jack and Sam have not committed to one another. I think the doubts they both have about being right for each other, the sexual tension, the angst, and the problems those doubts create, and the fiery hot sex they have when they DO get together, are all things that make up a good story. At least I think so, and I hope you agree. 

I can totally see Jack as a loner, an older man who has a past from which he needs to escape in order to retain his sanity.  Sam is young enough to still have doubts about what she is doing with her life and to change things.  I think giving up her careers as a teacher and writer, in order to search for treasure in far away places, is fantasy a lot of people would love to pursue, but they don't have the money. The pearls and other gemstones they found on the Lady Adelaide have given them the money they need to do whatever they want for a few years.  After that, who knows what will happen. Maybe they will decide to marry and have a family.  Maybe they will go their separate ways.  I haven't decided yet, but I assure you the final story in the series will include Sam's and Jack's plans for the future. 

Again, thank you for the compliments and for following me from the other site.  I hope everyone who frequented Siler's site has been told where to find me and the other authors. In order to make sure they know where to read our stories, please tell all the fans/readers you know.  As for what happened to Siler and the site, I asked Telkena to contact him.  In her last email to me regarding this matter, she said she was unable to reach him, and she is very worried about him.  I hope he is okay.

Keep checking this site for my next story, which will be co-authored by PaulineFitz.  hugs, ziva   

Name: PaulineFitz (Signed) · Datum: 2011.11.05 15:05 · Für: Chapter 5
Another excellent chapter. no matter how many times I read it I still thoroughly enjoy.  Thank you.

Author's Response:

Thank you for everything you have done for me as a proofreader and a critic, and for all the encouragement you have given me too.  And thank you for coming up with yet another great plot. I can't wait to see what you have added to your original story line for story 3 in the Captain Jack series. I know it will be wonderful. You are the bestest!  XO, ziva   

Name: samcarter (Signed) · Datum: 2011.11.04 16:18 · Für: Chapter 4
ohho  more please Ziva

Name: PaulineFitz (Signed) · Datum: 2011.11.04 10:32 · Für: Chapter 4
So good to have you back Z.  Me thinks that you may have added to this chapter, you and your editing LOL Excellent as usual, I do love Captain Jack.

Name: samcarter (Signed) · Datum: 2011.11.03 05:18 · Für: Chapter 3
mmm I think my brain has emmm err yeah....   lol  Brilliant and hot chapter  I hope you are feeling alot better now Z

Author's Response:

 I don't think it (a third party getting off while Jack and Sam make love) has ever been done before. I'm so glad you liked it.

I have good periods and bad. Am having a bad one just now.  I am reminded of the TV show "Just Shoot Me," but of course I don't mean it. Pain sucks.

Name: Naunakhte (Signed) · Datum: 2011.11.03 04:26 · Für: Chapter 3
Bit of a long time lurker here, but I have to say I am really enjoying this story :) I was reading all your other stories on S&J4ever before the site crashed so I hope it's back up soon so I can read all the stories that haven't made it over here :) 

Author's Response: I have a feeling the sjalways and forever site will not be back, so please stay tuned to Heliopolis Adult for my stories.  Thanx!

Name: Pauline Fitzsimmons (Anonymous) · Datum: 2011.11.03 01:46 · Für: Chapter 3
Missed you ! welcome back.! 

Author's Response:

Thank you and everyone who wished me well, and thanks also to those of you who stalked while eagerly awaiting the rest of this story.  You are the best friends a gal could have, and I cherish each and every review.

As for my illness, I have only a partial diagnosis. I have no doubt that lifting heavy boxes, when I moved recently, brought on my lower back ache.  My back no longer hurts.  Now it's my legs which are killing me.  I believe the muscle pain and weakness in my legs has something to do with the drug I took to lower my cholesterol. However, finding a doctor who agrees with me and is willing to state his opinion on paper, is another matter. So, although thousands of people have fought and won restitution for the damage the drug did to them, I am unable to do the same.

I am able to get around the house in a wheel chair or by using a walker.  The pain killer, etc. make me sleepy. I am nodding off while writing this, so that's all for now folks!  Love you all to pieces!  z

Name: Sasha713 (Signed) · Datum: 2011.10.25 18:34 · Für: Chapter 1

Well no one can say you aren't original Z. I am thoroughly enjoying this story. I have been off the SJ stuff for a while, but this story is bringing me back into the fold haha. I love this manifestation of Jack and Sam. Im not sure if I will post over here, but...Im still around :) get better yeah? Your fans might start to go crazy if they don't get regular updates *smirk*

Author's Response:

 I am scheduled to go home from hospital on Sunday, Oct 30. I will post the remainder of Capt. Jack and Lady Adelaide once I get home, maybe on Monday.  Be well all of you, and thanx for your kind words and for caring.  z

Name: Adelie King (Signed) · Datum: 2011.10.25 17:52 · Für: Chapter 1
Love both your captain Jack stories and can't wait to read more. Heard you're in the hospital and I hope you get well soon.

Author's Response: Thank you for your get well wishes. I have pinched nerves in my back probably caused by a broken bone in my spine. Not sure when or how I broke it. I will be home soon, and then I will work very hard to get the final chapters posted. Hang in there!  z

Name: long-time lurker (Anonymous) · Datum: 2011.10.19 14:16 · Für: Chapter 2

I have been reading your fanfiction on SJAlways-forever for over two years now, but never had the possibility to comment.

 I just wanted to say that you have some of the most original stories that I have read in fanfiction, and that you inspire me to try to figure out new and better ideas.

 I hope you feel better, and know that many of us out here hope you feel better!! 

Name: sammie77 (Anonymous) · Datum: 2011.10.16 15:33 · Für: Chapter 1

So glad I had Heliopolis still linked sing the other site has crashed. Been waiting for the next story and glad I found it! Hope Ziva feels better and gets out of the hospital soon. I would be great if she could post all of her stories here since we're not sure the other site is coming back or not. I have a few on my hard drive but would love to have all of them. Feel better Ziva - we miss you!!!

Author's Response: Thanx so very much for your kind words. I am still in hospital. Have possible diagnosis, and pain is less, but I cannot walk on my own. Am going to a rehab. hospital for another week, maybe today. I will try to get my son to email me the remainder of this story, so I can post it soon. Sorry for the delay, and thanx for your understanding.  xxx

Name: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Datum: 2011.10.14 23:57 · Für: Chapter 1
Hi every one, news on Ziva, she is in the Hospital, had a brief e-mail. Don't know exactly why, other than she has damaged her legs. Normal service will be resumed ASAP, Get well soon Z we miaa you.

Name: ccdsah (Anonymous) · Datum: 2011.10.13 08:38 · Für: Chapter 2
Where's the next chapter? You usually update daily. Please post some soon

Name: Lynn (Anonymous) · Datum: 2011.10.12 05:51 · Für: Chapter 2

Good to know I can find you here now :) I loved both chapters of this and am looking forward to lots more of Captain Jack and all the hotness that it entails - lol!

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