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Inside the Dragon's Egg

Autor: Offworlder
Eingestuft: GEN [Reviews - 19] starstarstarstarstar
Inhalt: What if the Ancient knowledge could be passed down genetically like the Goa'uld?
Kategorien: December 2007 Fic Challenge, Jack/Sam
Charaktere: Jack O'Neill, Samantha Carter
Episode Related: 0721 Lost City
Genres: Action/Adventure, Alternate Universe, Angst, Drama, Romance
Holiday: None
Season: Season 7
Warnings: character death, violence
Crossovers: None
Herausforderungen: None
Serie: None
Kapitel: 7 | Abgeschlossen: Yes | Wörter: 80141 | Gelesen: 17614
Veröffentlicht: 2007.12.24 | Aktualisiert: 2008.03.04

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Reviewer: Tribal Matriarch Signed
Date: 2008.02.20 Title: Chapter 2: Ancient Thoughts

Very Interesting!

I actually cried in a couple of places. Hope you update it soon and we see what will happen.



Author's Response: Thank you...I do have more to post as soon as my beta runs her critical eye over them. And I\'m working on what I sincerely hope is the final story--my health, house, and children are all suffering because this story is rather consuming! LOL\r\n\r\nI do have to say, I laughed when I saw your review as the other night while not quite able to take the plunge and write a particularly harrying scene, I read your \"Left Holding the Baby\". I didn\'t get around to writing a review but I meant too...I enjoyed it a lot-a very enjoyable story : )



Reviewer: Tribal Matriarch Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 2008.03.05 Title: Chapter 6: One Day

Doh! I wish this had carried on, but I know myself there's a point in which story becomes waffle if you allow it to!

Great premise and well written... my only gripe/peeve was the use of drug instead of dragged that you continually used.

I can live with it though, if I copy stories like yours I change the words for the correct ones anyway!

 

 

Well done once more!



Author's Response: Whoops…sorry about that. Your way looks and sounds so alien to me that I’m afraid this is a case of your sins finding you out…I might as well confess that when this lesson came around in school I apparently was either mentally out boldly going with Kirk, Spock, and McCoy or reading The Count of Monte Cristo under my desk : ( I’m glad you enjoyed the story anyway.

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