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Name: Tribal Matriarch (Signed) · Datum: 2008.03.05 12:34 · Für: One Day

Doh! I wish this had carried on, but I know myself there's a point in which story becomes waffle if you allow it to!

Great premise and well written... my only gripe/peeve was the use of drug instead of dragged that you continually used.

I can live with it though, if I copy stories like yours I change the words for the correct ones anyway!

 

 

Well done once more!



Author's Response: Whoops…sorry about that. Your way looks and sounds so alien to me that I’m afraid this is a case of your sins finding you out…I might as well confess that when this lesson came around in school I apparently was either mentally out boldly going with Kirk, Spock, and McCoy or reading The Count of Monte Cristo under my desk : ( I’m glad you enjoyed the story anyway.


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