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Name: Hedwig (Anonymous) · Datum: 2008.01.08 18:23 · Für: Anything For You
A very interesting story.  But no matter how well written, Sam is not so weak a woman as to have given in to this idiot just to save Jack.  She would have come up with a way better plan and not allowed herself to be mauled and/or raped by this guy.  She is soo totally not naive enough to think that him coming in for coffee wouldn't lead to something else and you do her a grave disservice by writing her this way.  Plus her combat training would not have allowed this to happen to herself.  She could have had him in his own handcuffs so fast he wouldn't know what had hit him.  She's so much more of a strong, independent woman than to have given in to this nitwit's demands.


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