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Name: Leon
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Mitglied seit: 2008.03.12
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Name: Leon
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New Beginnings
Autor: smileybug_gaterEingestuft: FAM [Reviews - 6]
Inhalt: Winner of the Unending/Episode Rewrite challenge for the December 2007 fic challenge contest.
Kategorien: December 2007 Fic Challenge
Charaktere: Cameron Mitchell, Daniel Jackson, Jack O'Neill, Samantha Carter, Tealc, Vala
Episode Related: 1020 Unending
Genres: Alternate Universe, Challenge
Holiday: None
Season: Season 10
Warnings: None
Crossovers: None
Herausforderungen: None
Serie: None
Kapitel: 2 | Abgeschlossen: Yes | Wörter: 11149 | Gelesen: 8710
Veröffentlicht: 2007.12.24 | Aktualisiert: 2007.12.24
Kategorien: December 2007 Fic Challenge
Charaktere: Cameron Mitchell, Daniel Jackson, Jack O'Neill, Samantha Carter, Tealc, Vala
Episode Related: 1020 Unending
Genres: Alternate Universe, Challenge
Holiday: None
Season: Season 10
Warnings: None
Crossovers: None
Herausforderungen: None
Serie: None
Kapitel: 2 | Abgeschlossen: Yes | Wörter: 11149 | Gelesen: 8710
Veröffentlicht: 2007.12.24 | Aktualisiert: 2007.12.24
Reviewer: Falco Signed
Date: 2008.03.12 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Author's Response: I agree. I had to finish on eight hours of sleep in three days so yeah I got a little tired of it. Maybe eventually I'll go back and revise. Who knows. Thanks for the response.
Date: 2008.03.12 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Very nice - but speed up WAY too much at the end, something I'm sure you know.
I'm new, so I'm not sure if there was a word limit you're adhering to, or if you simply ran out of patience by the end.
Great build-up, emotive language and actually felt realistic for the characters, which is something not all fan fiction manages to do effectively. I like it.
Author's Response: I agree. I had to finish on eight hours of sleep in three days so yeah I got a little tired of it. Maybe eventually I'll go back and revise. Who knows. Thanks for the response.
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