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Name: Sg1 fan (Signed) · Datum: 2010.01.25 16:36 · Für: Chapter 1
hey i read this a few days ago and i have to say that i thought it was fantastic, i really like your style and i love the way you really captured the characters. great work, only can you make it longer nextime, coz i was way too upset when i finished it, im gonna be looking up some of your other stuff. great job! :)

Name: monsie (Anonymous) · Datum: 2008.03.24 07:35 · Für: Chapter 2
Great story! Thank you for sharing it with us!

Name: Falco (Signed) · Datum: 2008.03.12 22:43 · Für: Chapter 2

Very nice - but speed up WAY too much at the end, something I'm sure you know.

I'm new, so I'm not sure if there was a word limit you're adhering to, or if you simply ran out of patience by the end.


Great build-up, emotive language and actually felt realistic for the characters, which is something not all fan fiction manages to do effectively. I like it. 

Author's Response: I agree. I had to finish on eight hours of sleep in three days so yeah I got a little tired of it. Maybe eventually I'll go back and revise. Who knows. Thanks for the response.

Name: Serafine (Signed) · Datum: 2008.02.16 01:58 · Für: Chapter 2
You really captured their voices - I enjoyed it so much! Congrats on winning - you deserve it!

Author's Response: Thank you.

Name: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Datum: 2008.01.30 08:14 · Für: Chapter 2
Now this is how Unending should have ended. I loved it.

Author's Response: Thanks. Glad you enjoyed it.

Name: Grizziesmom (Anonymous) · Datum: 2008.01.24 01:21 · Für: Chapter 2
Wow!  What a great rewrite of one of my favorite episodes!  I always wanted Jack to be there instead of Landry.  Thanks for sharing!

Author's Response: Thanks.

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