Name: StarGazer (Signed) · Datum: 2007.11.13 00:05 · Für: Consolation Prize
a great story but just one question. In the end of the second last chapter what was Jack referring to when he said Im going to regret this? why were they picking up Sam. Please enlighten me..
apart from that one point a great story!
Author's Response:
Hi Stargazer, thanks for the review!
You know I don't entirely remember what I was thinking.... Jack said he's going to regret this (joking) talking about living with Daniel generally . I think the idea was they were picking up Sam because she'd left her car somewhere, but now that you mention it, I'm not totally sure it makes sense anymore! Sorry about that :) Will have to be more careful!
Name: Dream Painter (Anonymous) · Datum: 2007.10.28 22:27 · Für: Consolation Prize
OMG! That is soooooo cute! *grins* Mini-Daniel! So adorable!
Author's Response:
Thanks :D
Name: Anuket (Anonymous) · Datum: 2007.10.28 13:30 · Für: Consolation Prize
I really enjoyed your story! Hopefully you will be submitting some more work in the future. I'm a really big fan of the Jack/Daniel hurt comfort relationship. I haven't been to this Heliopolis site in about 7 years and back then there was a story titled "little children" by author 'star' that I was hoping to find again since it was my all time favorite (after 7 years I would have been surprised to find it--but it did have SG1 turned into little children as the title suggests, so that was a fun similarity in your story), but your story was great. Good job!
Author's Response:Hey
Thanks so much for the review! And sorry it's taken so long to get back - respond wasn't working!
Incidentally, I've seen the story Little Children, incase you didn't find it... It's still on www.stargatefan.com
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