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Name: Maimat (Anonymous) · Datum: 2007.07.06 07:26 · Für: Freedom of Expression

LOL, I love it.  Especially the fact that though Daniel is so aware of the world around him, he is also so unaware of his place in it.  

 I love your writing style, there is nothing I can think of that would improve it other than more writing.  (hint) 



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it.  I'm a bit of a fan of the observant yet oblivious Daniel, I must admit. 
Heh, and thanks for the hint.  I'm working on it.  Slowly but... well, mostly just slowly.



Name: khyrra (Anonymous) · Datum: 2007.07.03 14:59 · Für: Freedom of Expression
Awesome little snippet!  I love how clueless Daniel is.

Author's Response: He really is, isn't he?  Glad you enjoyed the story.  Thanks for the review.


Name: Eve (Signed) · Datum: 2007.06.23 09:20 · Für: Freedom of Expression
This was a sweet little piece.  Thanks for posting!

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it.  Thanks for the review.


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