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Name: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Datum: 2008.02.28 19:38 · Für: 1/1

Okay great concept and I liked it but I do have some constructive criticism.

If you're going to quote actual lines from the episode, it should be word for word.

And Sam wouldn't have been able to do everything else that Jack did during the episode because she doesn't have the ATA gene and isn't advanced enough to hold and utilise the information.

But the concept is very imaginative and I like it so keep up the good work.

Courtney



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