Name: StarnightSam (Signed) · Datum: 2010.04.13 20:32 · Für: Chapter 1
Great read! Thought you were spot on with Jack and Sam's reaction to Daniel "glowy" exit. I love the way you brought their emotions and thoughts about Daniel to the front but still stayed with the way the ep was written. I loved this piece.
Great job as usual with the story and with the characters. Loved the situation you used (and the way you used Daniel) to make them think about their "Daniel" feelings even if they weren't able to completely discuss things. Tipical Jack and Sam. The Masters of burying their feelings.
Author's Response: Thanks...as always.
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