Name: Steadfast (Signed) · Datum: 2010.07.17 19:59 · Für: Carter Smiled
Great story. Thanks.
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you liked it.
Name: Kedd (Anonymous) · Datum: 2008.03.15 23:28 · Für: Carter Smiled
Lovely, once again! I especially like Carter's fears and her reaction to the aliens' reasons for choosing her and the fact that Jack hadn't been paying attention during the meeting. Those details are so true to form.
Author's Response: Thanks...I'm glad you enjoyed the story : )
Name: (Anonymous) · Datum: 2007.07.13 06:01 · Für: Carter Smiled
a 9 digit world id. its meant to be 6, not 5, 7, 8 or now nine. and yes i have seen the same mistake repeated time and again. you need a good beta, your plots and such are great but the little things really let you down.
Author's Response:
Author's Response: I haven't been ignoring your input, in fact, I have the revisions ready to upload. Unfortunately, I've only now gained access to my account to reply or begin to make changes. Thanks for the compliments on my plots (and whatever 'such'is, lol) and for pointing out the 6-digit problem.
As for the other, any problems with my stories rest squarely on my own shoulders. My beta does a great job of doing what she can...however; I frequently disregard her worthy advice--writer's perogative. Also, none of the earlier stories were betaed.
Not sure about you, but I'm here for fun. There comes a point when editing a story is no longer enjoyable. By then, it either says what I want it to say without so many blatant errors I'm ashamed to post it, or I'm so sick of the thing it's either post it or delete. Either way, to continue on with it is no longer fun. Therefore, it's as good as it's getting. Sorry if that point comes a little (or a lot) too soon for you, but...(here you may picture me-perferably young, lithe, and beautiful if your imagination can stretch that far)giving an apologetic though philosophical shrug.
Thanks for taking your time to give me your thoughts, Offworlder
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