Name: Clover (Signed) · Datum: 2008.11.25 02:09 · Für: Chapter 9
and the plot thickens. This is very good - short chapters and just enough happening to draw you into the next level. Well at least it is drawing me into the next chapter!!
Name: Clover (Signed) · Datum: 2008.11.25 01:03 · Für: Chapter 1
A great start - now I don't want to stop! Chapter 2 where are you?
Name: Anuket (Signed) · Datum: 2008.08.31 21:55 · Für: Chapter 21
Yay she said yes! Thanks for updating and giving me something to look forward to as I wander the internet.
Author's Response: Thanks for wandering my way! Thanks for the review too!
Author's Response: Thanks for wandering my way! Thanks for the review too!
Name: Anuket (Signed) · Datum: 2008.08.23 20:14 · Für: Chapter 18
Great couple of chapters...thanks for the quick update!
Author's Response:You are welcome! Thank you for reviewing! I'm glad you've stuck with me through all the computer terrible and my RL problems. Will post more ASAP!
Thanks!
Name: Anuket (Signed) · Datum: 2008.08.20 12:52 · Für: Chapter 15
Yay! Thanks for the update. I especially enjoyed the on the knees comforting part of Ch. 14. :)
Author's Response: Thanks! Update as soon as possible.
Name: Anuket (Signed) · Datum: 2008.07.22 21:36 · Für: Chapter 13
Please, put Jack, Sam and all the readers' minds at ease! Looking forward to the next chapter. :)
Author's Response: 8/20/08 Thanks for reviewing! and for reading. Hope the site will take the next two chapters!
Name: Anuket (Signed) · Datum: 2008.07.21 18:12 · Für: Chapter 10
Awwww...'your girl'. Very cute. Sorry, I've been on vacation and reading long books and then Stargate fandamonium books...got distracted from the fanfic online. I'm playing catch up!
Author's Response:Thanks for your review. The site would not take any updates from my computer for so reason. I finally got it to take the last two chapters. Sorry it's been so long, but Thanks for reviewing and for reading. Will post more as soon as possible.
Glad you liked this chapter!
Name: ALIMOO1971 (Signed) · Datum: 2008.06.12 14:43 · Für: Chapter 9
Great last few chapters so far, sorry i havent read the last few chapters, till today, i havent been well and i forgot about this story.... any way great so far, please, please, please up date soon... oh Sam didn't answer Jack mariage question, if yes what sort of ring have you decided on? If you not sure, i can give you some site addresses for you to look at, if it will help and same with the wedding dress
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I hope you're feeling better soon! No she hasn't answered yet... But as for dresses and rings..... well wait and see! Thanks for the info!! Glad you like it!
Name: Anuket (Signed) · Datum: 2008.06.11 19:13 · Für: Chapter 9
I'm surprised he wasn't fired! :)
Author's Response:According to my friend, it would be hard to justify. He didn't run the search himself, FBI guy did. He could have refused. (More to come! LOL... He's not off completely!) Thanks for reviewing! Glad you're still reading!
Name: Anuket (Signed) · Datum: 2008.06.04 21:03 · Für: Chapter 7
Tsk tsk Pete...you and your issues should go home, go to bed and stay out of trouble. And Jack's definitely not too old (to fantasize about hehe).
Author's Response: No... Not too old.... Thanks for your reviews! I'm thrilled! that you like this!
Name: ALIMOO1971 (Signed) · Datum: 2008.06.02 21:06 · Für: Chapter 6
Great funny chapter, i hope every thing works out for them both, please, please up date soon
Author's Response: Updated! Thanks for reviewing! and reading!
Name: ALIMOO1971 (Signed) · Datum: 2008.06.02 20:59 · Für: Chapter 5
great chapter, what the hell is pete doing in her house,??
Author's Response:He's Pete! He thinks WRONG! that Sam wanted him.... They left him there to lock up when they left.
Thanks so much for your reviews!
Name: Anuket (Signed) · Datum: 2008.05.31 15:31 · Für: Chapter 6
I had a hard time trying to imagine Pete saying those things, so I just pretended he was someone else. That someone else definitely had it coming, though!
Author's Response:Thanks for reviewing! I guess we all have our image of Pete. But to me any one who has a FBI friend do a search on you, means he's controlling and untrustworthy. He had his good moments in the series, I agree, but I just couldn't stand her with him... Sorry! But I'm glad you were able to over look my opinion of him! Thanks for reading! Hope it doesn't ruin the story for you....
Name: Anuket (Signed) · Datum: 2008.05.28 19:20 · Für: Chapter 5
Uh oh....it's going to get awkward very quickly!
Author's Response: Ya think? Thanks so much for reviewing! and for reading!
Name: ALIMOO1971 (Signed) · Datum: 2008.05.28 00:16 · Für: Chapter 4
wow great chapter after that hot sex, they are are in a 'cool' place even if it is for a short while, now it looks like things are going to get hot again, it rembers me of a song it gose some thing like this "It's getting hot in here, take off you clothes" i can't remeber who sang that song
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Glad you like it.
Name: Anuket (Signed) · Datum: 2008.05.27 00:06 · Für: Chapter 4
Sure is getting hot in here... ;)
Author's Response: It is. Wait til they get home. What a surprise!
Name: Anuket (Signed) · Datum: 2008.05.23 17:08 · Für: Chapter 3
Another great chapter!
And I feel that when people write good fanfiction I should acknowledge and encourage because if I was writing it and didn't hear anything back I would just stop (as well as sink into a depression). I need people out there to keep feeding my habit! :)
Author's Response:I really thank you for reviewing! It's thrilling to find reviews on this site, as they are rare! so they almost count double! LOL. I'm glad you are reading!!!! Thanks so much for your reviews!
Name: ALIMOO1971 (Signed) · Datum: 2008.05.23 16:42 · Für: Chapter 3
Great chapter, one thing through i don't think they would go up the mountain in december before christmas, they would frezze thier asses of cause it would be frezzing and snowing, it you change it till july auguest, then it would be late summer early fall. please up date soon
Author's Response: Now, Allison you know they don't care if they freeze their ..... off just as long as they can be together!!! LOL! Thanks for the reviews!!!
Name: ALIMOO1971 (Signed) · Datum: 2008.05.23 16:35 · Für: Chapter 2
Great chapter, at lest jack stop thier date, now the osiris mission, now that is going to be interesting in your story. I wounder if Pete going to show up and do a back round chack on Sam?
Author's Response: We'll have to wait and see! Thanks for reviewing! It really means a lot!
Name: Anuket (Signed) · Datum: 2008.05.21 23:28 · Für: Chapter 2
Haha, Jack better be extra nice to Sam to make up for that! Poor Paul...I mean Pete. ;) Thanks for the quick update! Instant gratification is a wonderful thing.
Author's Response: I like it too! (instant gratification that is! LOL) Thanks for reviewing! There are so many great stories out there I'm thrilled that you are reading mine and like it enough to let me know! Thanks again!
Name: Anuket (Signed) · Datum: 2008.05.20 23:41 · Für: Chapter 1
Great start! Don't leave us hanging!! :)
Author's Response: Thanks! for reading and for your review! Posting on the way.
Name: ALIMOO1971 (Signed) · Datum: 2008.05.20 15:41 · Für: Chapter 1
Great first chapter, please, please up date soon
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! and especially your reviews! I will post very soon.
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