Name: karenjoy (Anonymous) · Datum: 2008.05.13 21:41 · Für: Chapter 1

This was great, I could just see this happening, and boy did the guys get what they deserved.   Wouldn't mind seeing a sequel to this.

Name: Anuket (Signed) · Datum: 2008.05.13 20:41 · Für: Chapter 1

I really enjoyed your story.  Thanks for sharing!

Name: Texan (Anonymous) · Datum: 2008.05.12 17:48 · Für: Chapter 1

That was good! I liked it a lot. Nothing like a game of Paintball to prove who's the best after 20 yrs or so. Have to keep it in mind for that 25th yr reunion coming up... Still the little bit of mystery surrounding Jackson could have been amply well served by him giving oout that email addy of his, the one ending in airforce.mil? Might have been a good impact statement after a night of drinking with old friends. That, combined with the obviousl muscular physique would have had Bully Larry and his band of co-horts seeing Red!

This calls out for a sequel, not so much the day after but the night of the reunion...just to see other reactions at how DJ beat the bully.

Name: LE McMurray (Signed) · Datum: 2008.05.11 04:29 · Für: Chapter 1

Go Daniel.
This was a great story especially showing how much Daniel as changed over the years.

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