Name: Raynee (Signed) · Datum: 2008.04.04 14:38 · Für: Chapter 1
A few minor mistakes
Goa'uld. Tau'ri. Teal'c. Stargate.
other than that.. good job!
Author's Response:Thanks for the review!
I'll make those changes when I release the next chapter. :)
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