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Name: Raynee (Signed) · Datum: 2008.04.04 14:38 · Für: Chapter 1

A few minor mistakes

Goa'uld. Tau'ri. Teal'c. Stargate.

other than that.. good job!

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

I'll make those changes when I release the next chapter. :)



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