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Name: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Datum: 2008.02.22 01:13 · Für: Chapter 1
Now look what you've done? You've made me cry. And trust me, that's quite an acheivement. I rarely ever cry over fan fiction.
Just little bit of constructive criticism. I personally think the whole "Sam getting healed" thing was a bit rushed.
But the S/J interaction pulled at the heartstrings and overshadowed everything.
Well done.
O'NeillRoxMyWorld
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