Name: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Datum: 2008.04.26 20:13 · Für: Chapter 1
THis is anteresting story, but it needs to have separate paragraophs in it. It is difficult to read without them
Name: fly (Anonymous) · Datum: 2008.02.09 07:24 · Für: Chapter 1
I agree with sammie, please format your story. I'm getting a headache just ooking at it.
Author's Response:Really sorry about the formatting. The story has been transferred from Windows 98 Wordpad onto Windows XP Word and I've had no end of problems trying to sort it out.
Grace is also on fanfiction.net and although the formatting on that is screwy too it's not as bad.
Name: sammie77 (Anonymous) · Datum: 2008.02.09 07:15 · Für: Chapter 1
I would love to read this but the formatting is terrible. Use paragraphs and change paragraphs when each character speaks. This is too jumbled to read as is! Please reformat and post again!
Author's Response:Really sorry about the formatting. The story has been transferred from Windows 98 Wordpad onto Windows XP Word and I've had no end of problems trying to sort it out.
Grace is also on fanfiction.net and although the formatting on that is screwy too it's not as bad.
Name: Carter (Anonymous) · Datum: 2007.12.12 13:02 · Für: Chapter 1
Hey Vala
That rocked, I really laughed at some points and my brother probably thinks I am now mad, not that he didn't think that before but eh.
You really must continue it soon, and I must try my hand at this. Fanfic I already write, as you know, must try writing stargate stuff though. hmm, wheres my paper and pen. hehe
10/10
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