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Name: campylobacter (Signed) · Datum: 2010.12.13 13:10 · Für: I've got to see a man about a General
This is confusing. Maybe you meant it as an AU?
Why would Landry need to ask Teal'c about the time dilation bubble? HANK WAS THERE WITH THEM TOO. He'd have been one of the first on the Odyssey after the time reversal to discuss why Teal'c had memories and the rest of them didn't.
It's Vala who says "Life is too short" in the Gateroom, not Teal'c in the commissary.
Name: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Datum: 2008.04.15 09:42 · Für: I've got to see a man about a General
Such a good addition to Unending! You made me smile :)
Name: Ashley (Anonymous) · Datum: 2007.06.29 03:56 · Für: I've got to see a man about a General
One thing. At the end of Unending when SG1 is talking about the things Teal'c told him about what he learned on the Odyssey, when Vala says Life is too short, Daniel gives her a look of almost recognition. What you wrote doesn't fit into the story if Teal'c already told them. Then Daniel and Vala would already know that life is too short. Good job for your first story.
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