Name: Offworlder (Signed) · Datum: 2008.12.30 15:29 · Für: 2001
Great story...the scene where she finally understands he didn't know she had loved him made my cry--very nicely done. And I love that in the end he finds the courage to at least talk around the issue with her.
Name: Whyagain (Signed) · Datum: 2007.07.28 21:03 · Für: 2001
I think your dialog is wonderful. It was a bittersweet story, but I'm not complaining. A little unrealistic toward the end, but mostly genuine. It was a nice follow-up.
-WhyA
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