Name: ALIMOO1971 (Signed) · Datum: 2008.05.11 22:09 · Für: Call It Fate
Great poem
Name: ALIMOO1971 (Signed) · Datum: 2008.05.11 22:09 · Für: Call It Fate
Great poem
Name: (Anonymous) · Datum: 2007.06.24 22:14 · Für: Call It Fate
a good poem needs meter as much as rhyme. one cannot be sacrificed for the other. i know getting that right is hard, but that balance is what turns a bunch of rhymes into beautiful poetry. its a good story, just needs some work on delivery.
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