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Name: Daria (Anonymous) · Datum: 2007.07.02 22:28 · Für: Severing - Chapter 4
I am enjoying this story very much, and look forward to the rest of it. I don't really have any suggestions for improving style right now. I particularly like your 'voices' for the characters. They are spot on. I also like the way you've captured Daniel's internal dialogue, and the sense of confusion he is experiencing. Keep writing.
Author's Response: Thanks very much. It's important to me to make the voices believable, so it's good to know if I've been successful. Glad you're enjoying the story so far. Thanks for the review.
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