Name: fly (Anonymous) · Datum: 2007.12.24 00:51 · Für: Zero Week
outstanding.
liked all those details about the USAF. quite interesting for someone whose knowledge about the US military is purely based on TV shows.
I'm really hoping you'll find the time to write a sequel. Whatever you're going to do I'm really grateful for all the time you've invested.
Happy Christmas!
Author's Response:Sorry to burst your bubble, Fly. But I am career USAF. I am currently a Master Sergeant working in the Medical Group. My husband is also career USAF with the Security Forces Squadron. He QC's all my fight scenes for accuracy. I have deployed to several hostile areas over my career. One of the things that I love about Stargate is the accuracy used to portray the USAF culture. Early on the USAF adopted Stargate and has continued to support the series and the movies. In fact, except for the "The Children of the Gods" (Jack's escort had both officer and enlisted rank on his uniform) I have not seen any errors in the program.
Now, that said, I really enjoyed the research this story involved. I when through BMT in 1993 and the training program has changed significantly since then. However, the main difference between the USAF and it sister services is most apparent in BMT. I tried to express that in this story, to give the reader a true feeling of the USAF culture and how it is achieved. It truely is my Air Force Family.
Rocza
Name: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Datum: 2007.12.16 14:01 · Für: Zero Week
Please post the next part soon! I've just been re-reading the posted "weeks" and waiting! Love your writing style, love all the details, and I'm looking forward to mini-Jack's reunion with everyone at the SGC. Keep it up, but keep it up faster dammit :)
Author's Response:Last one is finally posted. Enjoy!
Name: Darkest Knight (Signed) · Datum: 2007.12.12 04:50 · Für: Zero Week
LOL fantastic I love the practical joke
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm sure you'll love the rest of the story then. Many more jokes to come.
Name: Nath (Anonymous) · Datum: 2007.11.18 19:36 · Für: Zero Week
This stort is awsome. Just read it. Can't wait to see what's coming. When the rest is coming?? :o)
Nath
Author's Response: The last chapter will hopefully be up around the New Year. Thanks for reading.
Name: Raynee (Signed) · Datum: 2007.10.13 11:57 · Für: Zero Week
excellent story!
Perhaps this is a bit premature, but are you planning on writing a sequel? Jon in Atlantis or something like that... that 'd be really great :o)
Author's Response:No sequel planned yet. This one took alot out of me. I spent hours researching and sorting through the information to make it realistic without all the excessive boring detail. Trust me, I could have given some of those briefings and actually have in one or two cases. Now a days, I am MSgt Cooper.
But because of this, I am drained. I'll post the last chapter and take a nice long break from this story line. I may come up with a sequel later, but it is too soon to tell. Thank you for your interest and for reading.
Name: Elizabeth (Anonymous) · Datum: 2007.07.19 10:02 · Für: Zero Week
I have now read all of your stories and am thoroughly impressed. You are a writer that makes the readers want to read more. Heck I'm not even into Stargate Atlantis and I read the one about Woolsey. Well done! :)
Author's Response:Thanks for the positive feedback. I have been an avid reader for decades and when my favorite authors take so long to write 'the next novel', I have often filled in the blanks. Though some stories demand to be written (Daniel's Hell), most have just flowed. At times I think they write themselves and just use me as a way to seek public attention.
Thanks again for the kind words.
Name: rosebud (Anonymous) · Datum: 2007.06.28 09:20 · Für: Zero Week
I very much enjoyed this story. Partly because my background includes working for the DOD for over 25 years and watching the little recruits coming through the training courses. It was great to put the character, Jon O'Neill through basic. It would be interesting to read about his career and see where some events would come out different for him. Great and keep it up!
Author's Response:Thanks for the review. I have found writing this cathartic. I didn't realize that I had that much pent up anger from BMT. It was over 14 years ago.
Anyway, I don't know how far Jon will go in the real world. My muse is trying to steer him back to the SGC. It's all I can do to keep him in basic and maybe Technical school.
We'll see where this leads. Thanks again.
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