Reviews For Tears of Aphrodite

Name: Gatewatcher (Signed) · Datum: 2008.11.29 08:32 · Für: Prologue

This is briliant, but I really need more!
Its got me back into reading fic for the first time in a while so please post the next chapter soon!

Author's Response: Thanks. I am working on it but RL is interfering and the plot bunny isn't being insistent. I have the whole plot outlinted though, so don't worry. I'll be finishing it, hopefully by the end of the year. Keep posted.

Name: Texan (Anonymous) · Datum: 2008.11.24 13:37 · Für: Chapter 19

Only one thing really stands out here...

Always thought the DEFCON scale was 5 to 1, with 5 being peace and 1 being war...or do I have that backwards? Cause Daniel stating that they've reached DefCon 5 on the scale makes no sense the way i've interpreted it?


Author's Response: I couldn't remember and I was in too big a hurry to check. I know that they showed the DEFCON sign in the Kinsey episode in season 8 but...I know...poor research...bad author. No more cookies for you.

Name: Celtic (Anonymous) · Datum: 2008.11.18 18:06 · Für: Chapter 19
OMG!  This story is great!  You have me giggling like a school girl.  Can't wait for the next chapter!  I hope the higher the rating the better, cause I'm rating this a 10!

Author's Response: Thanks. I try to use humor as a deflection technique. Sometimes it works. Sometime I make myself laugh.

Name: Texan (Anonymous) · Datum: 2008.11.18 15:40 · Für: Chapter 18

Ok, well, i thoroughly enjoyed what i've read. Even the parts about FLYERS being totally nuts. But i think you're being a bit biased...I mean, you being Air Force and all ;)

Author's Response: Thanks. Of course, I have been around alot more USAF flyers so it could be bias...or simply a preponderance of evidence. We'll see.

Name: ImmerRDA (Anonymous) · Datum: 2008.11.13 19:24 · Für: Chapter 18

Wow! Two more chapters! The room temperature went up at least 10 degrees when Sam and Jack got together in the supply room. But I can't believe that the two of them just straightened up their clothes and went back to work. Sheesh!

Really great chapters. Thanks so much! I usually don't read works in progress but this one is definitely an exception!!!! 

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you are sticking with it. I usually hate to write WIPs for the same reason. But occassionally, I need the constant pressure to get the story done.

Name: GateFan (Anonymous) · Datum: 2008.11.13 06:38 · Für: Chapter 17

Ok...worse than before.  How can we help you write faster????


Thanks for the story btw.  If you couldn't tell, I'm really liking it. 

Author's Response: Do my job, babysit my kids, and keep my husband entertained would be a start. But I'm not so sure about sharing my husband. Is is my inspiration for all the...um...sex scenes. :)

Name: ImmerRDA (Anonymous) · Datum: 2008.11.12 10:12 · Für: Chapter 16

Hurrah! Two more chapters! This is great! Something tells me, though, that this is the calm before the storm. And I know that lab tests can be infallible.

Can't wait for more! Hope RL will be kind to you!

Author's Response: They can be but so far these are not. Not pregnant and hormones are 'within acceptable parameters.' But, of course, everything is far from normal...

Name: ImmerRDA (Anonymous) · Datum: 2008.11.11 14:36 · Für: Prologue
I found your story and read all of it in just a couple of hours. Great plot and you've got the characters right. Now when are you going to stop tormenting them? I feel sorry for Jack and I know Sam's just as frustrated. So am I, so don't leave us hanging too long!

Author's Response: I can't stop tormenting them yet. But they will get a bit of relief in chapter 17. Which has to go through one more edit before posting. Maybe tomorrow. Thanks for the review.

Name: GateFan (Anonymous) · Datum: 2008.11.09 20:02 · Für: Chapter 14

Ok...that isn't fair, get me hooked then leave me hanging...where oh where is the rest???


Author's Response: Still in the works. RL has been hard on me, but the next chapter is up.

Name: Jesica (Anonymous) · Datum: 2008.09.14 00:42 · Für: Chapter 14

OHHH PLEASEE, NOT LET ME LIKE THIS¡¡¡¡¡. I need to know what happend next jajaj. Good work. Keep going.

Bye bye for now.     Thanks.

Author's Response: Didn't mean to leave you hanging. I just posted the last chapter written. I hope to get to the next one written soon.

Name: jkat (Anonymous) · Datum: 2008.09.13 19:59 · Für: Chapter 14
this is great, cant wait for more

Author's Response: I've had a bit of problem getting to Helio 2 lately. I just posted the last chapter written. Otherwise, I've been stuck in the writting arena.

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