please update soon.
This is really good--I can't wait for you to finish it.
Come on, going nuts here. Please hurry.
how can you stop there. I have to know what happens :) please update soon
Author's Response: Hi, i'm just tweaking the next chapter, shouldn't be to long now
Another Good chapter, I really like the way you are depicting Sam, that is how normal women would react, Not like TPTB wrote it. Can't wait to see how he defends himself. And will she forgive him? (I would only have to look into his brown eyes) we shall see. Look forward to next update.
Great to see you update this again. Hope there's more soon!
Wow! that was a fantastic chapter, far better than the tripe TPTB gave us. I am so enjoying this, and Sam's reaction. More please.
that's so sad. poor jack. can't wait for the next chpt
tis is a gteat story. stories with "100 days" theme are my favorite...keep writing
You can't leave it hanging there! I really love Sam's vulnerability in this story and can't wait for the next chpt!!!
I love this story, its one of the best Ive read concerning 100 days, I just can't wait for the next chapter now :(
I can't thank you enough for updating this story. It is one of the best 100 days I have read. I am glad that Sam was so angry with Jack, he deserved it. But what now, she obviously still loves him. Can't wait for your next update, please make it soon.
God I really hate Jack for this!
Sam should so go out and sleep with/date/have hot none strings attached sex with some hot piece of meat, give Jack a taste of his own medicine .
and then he can come begging for her forgivnes in tears, and she shall have him as her pet !!
Now that would be awesome !
please tell me you have not lost intrest in this, it is truly an amazing story !
P.s. i really wanna rip Jack to pieces, please continue the story, so Sam can do it for me !!
Nyaa for gods sake please update soon ! Im dying here ! Need to know what happens !
Oh this is much better! I'm *really* pleased to see you continue with this story. This chapter was well done with a nice balance of dialog and description. And, of course, you've upped the angst ante again! I hope you can update more regularly now.
Author's Response: Thanks, i'm never really that sure as to dialog, i find writing about the emotional side a lot easier, i glad you like the mix. And trust me there is more angst to come, and hopefully soon
Thanks for the update. I'm always up for Laira angst- good stuff, too!
Just a suggestion on to, too:
"Too" means also, and "to" is a direction (going TO the store.) It may seem nitpicky, but it's like the plural/possessive apostrophe thing- when you see "the boy's" (possessive) vs. "the boys" (plural) your brain is prepared for one thing and gets something different. It disrupts the flow of the story.
However- I really like the story and look forward to your next installment!
hey, sorry about the mistakes i will try to keep a better lookout for them in future, glad you like the story next chapter coming soon
Glad you have updated. I am so enjoying this. It is good that Sam hasn't forgiven Jack too quickly, but no doubt she will eventually. Are you going to include "Shades of Gray" into this? I am on Sam's side in this, he shouldn't have done it!!!
Hi, yea i am going to include shades of grey, which will be in the next chapter that i am in the middle of writing now. Also, on a side note i am undecided as to where i will leave the story, so i wouldn't go assuming to much just yet. Glad you like the story so far.
great story so far, please, please up date soon, Jack sure got a lot of groverling to do
[[insert British accent here]]PLEASE SIR MAY I HAVE SOME MORE
I would say Jack has an enormous amount of groveling to do if he wants Sam back. If they were in a relationship, then three months on Edora is simply not long enough for him to give up all hope of being rescued and hop into bed with Laira. He should have held out waaaay longer than that, if he ever gave in and had sex with Laira; he should have had more faith in Sam. I really can't believe he just showed up at Sam's house expecting to pick up where they'd left off as though nothing had happened. I have not a shred of sympathy for him. And another "strike" against him is that he tried to make it Sam's problem rather than his or theirs together. Plus, so far, he's showed not a shred of appreciation for her efforts to bring him home. I've read some of the other reviews here and I actually don't find it hard to believe Sam would say what she did about Laira. After all, Sam is exhausted, she's just found out her lover cheated on her, she's incredibly hurt, she's very angry - all those things would certainly lead to her saying something she wouldn't say under "normal" circumstances. Sorry this is so long. I did like the story, and I'm looking forward to seeing how this gets resolved. Please don't let Sam forgive him too quickly or easily. Of course, there are so many other episodes where "personal issues" were left unresolved and we didn't get to see any fall-out, and I like to read the perspective of you authors on how some of them may have been resolved.
I was *very* glad to see and update on this story, even such a short one. I hope you can get the rest of the chapter up soon. It was nice to see Sam interacting with Janet and Cassie, but it would be nicer to see a little more description among the dialog--facial expressions, gestures, hesitations, smirks, hands through hair, stumbles, smiles, whatnot.
Great chapter, well written, don't let Sam forgive him tooo quickly. Glad you are updating!
I guess, I too find some of the language a bit out of character. You have created a story where Sam and Jack are in a secret relationship, so there's no way Laira can be blamed for being interested in Jack. If anyone's at fault, it's Jack. Despite her anger, I find it hard to believe that Sam would call Laira a bitch, nor expect Jack to characterize her as an "evil cow."
Still, aside from that objection, I think you did justice to the talk they had to have. And, I'm waiting for an update.
I liked the first 2 chapters. However I did have a hard time picturing Sam or Jack using some of the discriptive dialog. It seemed very odd or out of character. ie. "she was a evil cow..."
Hope to see chapter 4 up soon.
YES! Sam gave him whatfor, thats what TPTB should have filmed, I love this story, can't wait for the next update.