Read the whole story which basically parallels the first season episodes. Especially loved your version of Broca Divide. That Sam was not a soldier allowed for more leeway in the retelling. Also though sad that Sarah was dead, Charlie wasn't . The death of Charlie greatly influenced Jack's life.
A very nice version of Jack meets Sam
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it.
Great, Charlie is alive in this version, but Sarah is dead. I guess it will work out for the story. Going back to Abydos is not recanted here. Guess all Stargate fans know how it went.
Author's Response: Yeah I thought this AU gave it a nice twist, I see you are making your way through my stories, hope you enjoy them all!
Yeah! Sam is not military. Jack is in for a ride...
Author's Response: So glad!
This is another one of my favorites that you have written. I loved the slant you put on this. I don't think I've read any others where Sara was killed instead of Charles. Great attention holding story!
Author's Response: LOL they are all your favorites! Thanks for the review, it's nice to have such a fan!
I liked it! I was surprised at the twist of having Sarah die instead of Charlie, but it worked!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it and thanks so much for the review!