Name: brook (Anonymous) · Datum: 2012.06.30 16:43 · Für: Chapter 23

Read the whole story which basically parallels the first season episodes.    Especially loved your version of Broca Divide.   That Sam was not a soldier allowed for more leeway in the retelling.  Also though sad that Sarah was dead, Charlie wasn't .   The death of Charlie greatly influenced Jack's life.  

A very nice version of Jack meets Sam

Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it.

Name: brook (Anonymous) · Datum: 2012.06.30 04:13 · Für: Chapter 3
Great, Charlie is alive in this version, but Sarah is dead.   I guess it  will work out for the story.    Going back to Abydos is not recanted here.   Guess all Stargate fans know how it went.  

Author's Response: Yeah I thought this AU gave it a nice twist, I see you are making your way through my stories, hope you enjoy them all!

Name: brook (Anonymous) · Datum: 2012.06.30 03:53 · Für: Chapter 1
Yeah! Sam is not military.   Jack is in for a ride...

Name: Eluminadia (Anonymous) · Datum: 2009.08.10 09:18 · Für: Chapter 1
Loved it!

Author's Response: So glad!

Name: Starnight (Anonymous) · Datum: 2008.01.13 12:08 · Für: Chapter 1
This is another one of my favorites that you have written.  I loved the slant you put on this.  I don't think I've read any others where Sara was killed instead of Charles.  Great attention holding story!

Author's Response: LOL they are all your favorites! Thanks for the review, it's nice to have such a fan!

Name: sirtechlocke (Anonymous) · Datum: 2008.01.12 00:00 · Für: Chapter 23

I liked it! I was surprised at the twist of having Sarah die instead of Charlie, but it worked!

 Well done!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it and thanks so much for the review!

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