I don't know if you have any intention of finishing this story but I would like it if you did.
Author's Response: I would love to finish it. But my muse abandoned me. I have one future chapter drafted and half written, but I don't have the in between story written yet, so I can't post it. For now, it is stalled, but I come back to it frequently to see if my muse is ready to write the next bit. Sorry. Wish I had better news.
Encore! Encore!
Author's Response: I will...eventually, get back to this story. Still trying to finish Tears by the end of the year first.
Its a great story and love the way Jack & Sam have to be together- can't wait for more
Author's Response: They don't have to be 'together' together, but they are stuck in Lemuria...so why not. What's Hammond going to do? Court-Martial them? I don't think so. I'm glad you like the story so far. I'm working another story right now but I plan on getting back to SST soon.
Great story! I like the plot and you've got a knack for dialogue. Thanks for sharing,
Abby Eddey
Author's Response: Thank you. I appreciate your comments. I have been a fan of your fic for some time.
This is hot, angsty just right and very creative! Keep going!
Author's Response: Thank you.
excellent! glad you decided to continue this story, I really enjoy alpha-sam :o) refreshing change after all those more-or-less virgins
Do you know when that werewolffic of yours will be ready to be posted? It's sounds interesting.
Author's Response: Thank you. No one gets to be a Major, let alone Lt Col without having something extra. Virginfic is totally unrealistic. rnrnI haven't added anything new to the werewolf fic yet. It's still on the backburner as this fic resolves itself. Since the JFAT fic is done, I can focus on the others. But a new idea popped into my head today for that fic so I may get back to it sooner than later. rnrnThanks for the review.
OMG I loved it.
*flails*
Author's Response: Thanks. I may revise the ending in the future. It was rushed, but I was stumped. I'll clear up my pending projects and revisit this one.
This fic is so cool blows those virgin Sam fic out of the water. I want to send this to Lil Feret if it would be okay. She is writing a fic and I want to show what Alpha Sam is and how hot it is. Did I mention this fic really needs another chapter where they both are fully aware oh yeah
Author's Response: Alpha Sam comes from my own experience in the USAF. There are only two types that join the military. Those that are looking for a husband and those that are too agressive to survive in the civilian sector. Sam definately is not the former. Now, the second group quickly learns how to cope in a male centered world. Sam's approach mirrors my own, politely forceful. I have also used technobabble to intellictually beat some peers into submission.rnrnThat said, Sam's internal voice is all from me. That is the kind of attitude that I have sucessfully hidden under a pretty face for coming up on 15 years. rnrnIs there more coming? Yeah... Maybe... We'll see.
Great story! Please write more. What happens to them now that they are on this planet living in this city, do they ever find Altantis, do they have kids?
Author's Response: I don't know. I kind of have a few ideas to fix the rushed ending, but I haven't really applied myself to a future. I may continue it. I don't know yet.
What a hoot! Especially when Sam confronted Jack and yelled at him about asking her what she wanted instead of supposing all sorts of things; and then the part where the "evil" Sam came out and really let him have it. What a wicked sense of humor. It's been a really long time since I read anything about Lemuria; what a creative idea.
Author's Response: The original idea was in the dream and how they would cope with the aftermath. But when doing research on Atlantis I found that there are several different stories about a sinking continent. That sparked the Lemuria storyline. Next thing I know, my short story is turning into a novel. Hence the rushed ending. I'm glad you liked it.
Wow!!!! Amazingly 'fun' story to read, as well as a wonderful plot line, the whole city caretakers thing is a wonderful idea!!! It would make a great book. Ah well i've said it before and i'll say it again, you're a
Author's Response: Thanks. I have found that it is a much longer storyline than I originally planned. The ending was rushed mainly because I didn't plan past there. I may revisit this story later when I have more time.
Great story - really enjoyed it!! More stories please!!!
Author's Response: Thank you.
I had a great time reading your story. I hope more are coming!
Author's Response: Thanks. There are, but not all are Helio 2 material. The rest are in Heliopolis.
Ummm more please?
Author's Response: Thanks. One more like this posted here. But I always welcome ideas. Email me directly if you have something in mind.