Name: Janice Prince (Anonymous) · Datum: 2007.10.25 15:35 · Für: Chapter 5: A Sign of Things to Come
Okay, well undoubtedly I'll have more to say after Chapter 5, but W0W, you do have a knack for building up suspense.  And this thing that Jack knows that nobody else knows is really tantalizing.  On to Chapter 6.  You also seem to have a flair for descriptions, as in Jack' nightmares with all the bodies around him.  Good job.

Name: Raynee (Signed) · Datum: 2007.10.01 22:13 · Für: Prologue: Sweet Dreams:
like the story so far, please continue!

Name: savannah (Anonymous) · Datum: 2007.09.30 13:33 · Für: Chapter 5: A Sign of Things to Come

OOOH, i love ur story its fascinating, no-one else has done anything like this, its so creative, i want more!!! i paticularly enjoy the build up in each of your chapters!


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