Reviews For A Life Undone

Name: fredd (Anonymous) · Datum: 2007.08.31 14:59 · Für: Chapter 7
This is going great, i've love it so far and this is far out one of the best chaps. I specialy liked the love scene, yo write so darn well it's just...awesome.

Author's Response: Well to be perfectly honest for me it's the smut.... ehm..... love scenes that motivate a story. i'm not a writer per se, I just write.... love scenes.... smut scenes, porn. and other such scenes.... And around that I build the whole story depending on how I want that scene to be and what to express. And so the story is born. Odd thing though, with this one I built the story first and then wrote the smut to complement it.... odd, really.... I guess that's why it was so well liked. Maybe i should try focusing on the story more than ze smut... Seemes to work rather darn well...... Shocking, really..... THANK YOU!

Name: Jeff (Anonymous) · Datum: 2007.08.31 14:11 · Für: Chapter 6
This chap is awesome, actually the whole thing (what i've read so far) is amaezing

Author's Response: Awww, i really apreciate that. Thank you. This is really a special fic for me. and I'm happy you guys received it so well too. Hopefully my muse will come up with something just as good again. THANK YOU.

Name: Dan. (Anonymous) · Datum: 2007.08.31 13:33 · Für: Chapter 5
why?...i mean....he could have waited 3 minutes...or 3 lines...the point is..IN NOT FEAR...how come he kills himself?..I know, you don't do character deaths but still, it got to me, this fic is really awesome, i love your writting style and that thing you have for freckles :P

Author's Response: I did it cause... wait.... are you seeing you didn't see it coming like.... a mile away? REally? Wow.... *is proud* Well i did it cause I figured while I'm torturing the shit outof him (pardon the language) I might as well do it for all he's worth..... plus, it made sense, kinda.... jack always goes out by his own terms and if he was willing to do it after charlie, I figured he'd be ready to do it after ahh this failed struggle to get Sam back.... plus it's fanfic so all was well inthe next chapter.... *nods* I'm a sucker, I know..... *grin* HAHAHAHAHAHAHA...... Freckles.... OMG YES!!! I have to blame a friend for that, really... but it's really a set thing now for us.... Sam's freckles.... and come on, to hour defense they are quite damn fascinating and so cute and sweet..... Just like Jack's eyebrow scar and his.... ummm..... squirrel.... and don't go thinking dirty!!! I mean his chest hair.... that's the squirrel.....although if you start thinking about furry cute creatures that's shy to come out and play.... I guess you could be thinking of other things as well...... heh....

Name: Amy (Anonymous) · Datum: 2007.08.31 11:21 · Für: Chapter 4
she should leave...PUSH THE BUTTON!!...anyway this is a great story, i really don'tmind the end coz...she'll end up with a Jack....right?...RIGHT??!...i'll just go and read.

Author's Response: It took me about three days to figure out if she should or shouldn't go with John.... But I figured... oh screw it do the cliche thing.... And honey, really..... I ALWAYS have happy endings.... S&J will always end up together in any universe I write..... with lots and lots of smut too......

Name: Peter (Anonymous) · Datum: 2007.08.31 10:08 · Für: Chapter 2
...she should leave with john...i mean if Jack is so into Sara let him there...Sam should be happy. btw this is an awesome fic, keep going!!

Author's Response: Well you know how fics can turn and twist at one word.... Jack may seem he's into Sara cause that's how Sam sees him and we all know how much he sucks when it comes to expressing his feelings and letting her into his mind and soul....... so.... Maybe he's not into Sara as much as she thinks..... He hasn't discussed his family life with her after that night... she really doesn't know what's going on at his home, so....younever know..... but she does have a...... feeling..... *grin* That's why she waits....

Name: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Datum: 2007.08.30 22:14 · Für: Chapter 1
Wow!!  I've read most of your stories, and that was by far the best you have ever written.  It is one of the best I have read ever.  That was such a great story!!   I hope you are working on another one!

Author's Response: Oh that's so nice of you to say.... thank you... I just hope that whatever i do come up with after this won't disappoint.... I am quite attached to this story myself and I doubt I'll be able to top this.... THANK YOU.

Name: Ark (Anonymous) · Datum: 2007.08.30 17:07 · Für: Chapter 1
that's  sad, see a jack..or jhon struggling like that, somehow i see jack doing exactly the same thing for her.

Author's Response: Jack will always be jack..... head over heels for his sam.... Thanks.

Name: Cindy (Anonymous) · Datum: 2007.08.28 16:24 · Für: Chapter 11

AWSONE!!! Thanks for a great story.


Author's Response: THANK YOU!!! I'm really the one who should be thank you . Glad you like it! Hugs.

Name: Veronika (Anonymous) · Datum: 2007.08.27 01:31 · Für: Chapter 1
I loved the story so far, its a great idea. I'm a crazy jack and sam fan so would love to see them together, but i do feel sad for the pther jack, as he loves her too. Good work keep it up, hope to see more soon.

Author's Response: Oh don't worry.... all Jacks will gettheir Sams and thei happy endings... Tis what I do.... *nods*

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