Reviews For A Life Undone

Name: Lady Talathiel (Anonymous) · Datum: 2008.02.26 23:27 · Für: Chapter 11
A truly amazing work, heart-warming, and a beautifully exquisite read.  I look forward to reading future works of yours.

Author's Response: Wow that's very flattering.... I'm veryhappy youliked it. Sadly I think this was the best I ever wrote and probably will write.... I can try to do something similar, but I don't think I can promise anything..... it was a really special fic for me. Thanks!

Name: Fluffy Bunny (Anonymous) · Datum: 2008.01.31 07:00 · Für: Chapter 11

My god woman can you write!

Loved every single word of this story (mind you, I've loved all of your stories so no shock there), you had me crying, you had me laughing.  Beautiful, just...incredible.

Author's Response: I'm very happy you like it. Please excuse the late reply, but I'm not getting notifications when new reviews are posted.... I'm really really happy you liked it. Thank you.

Name: Dezzie13 (Anonymous) · Datum: 2008.01.07 18:10 · Für: Chapter 1
I think any true SG-1 fan has hoped that Jack and Samantha would end up together (even after RDA left and now when she is in another galaxay.) To have a story written with such care for the plot and characters is a joy for true fans! I know a lot of people (including me) are hoping for some kind of closure (the good kind) between Sam and Jack in Continuum since RDA is in it, but we know it probably won't happen. I wish they would make another movie about this story! It certainly could make Jack wake up!!! Hopefully! GREAT story, really well written and showing true love of the Stargate universe and characters. THANKS!!!

Author's Response: Well we finally got the review reply up...... and I'm very grateful for that because i have to say how much I appreciate your words. It's a lovely, touching review and I really do appreciate your words so much. As I've said before it's the story that's closest to my heart and I'm glad some of that has shown through in how the fic was written. And that you likes it so much. I am very happy you did. THANK YOU. To all of you, really. I have always made it a point to reply to all the reviews I received so I will try to go back to each and every one and reply. But until I get to dothat, THANK YOU!!!! TO ALL OF YOU!

Name: Janice (Anonymous) · Datum: 2007.12.21 10:48 · Für: Chapter 11
Now THIS is a happy ending!

Author's Response: It was kinda cliche and mushy (it's a word!) but hey.... it's what I do, really..... *grin* Thank you.

Name: Janice (Anonymous) · Datum: 2007.12.21 10:10 · Für: Chapter 9
I love Ronon's attitude.  And Teyla's reaction, but Jack's realizing that she understood. 

Author's Response: He does understand quite a lot, really.... without saying... but he's gotta do what he's gotta do and he still had the memories from last time and hey.... he just HAS to do what he HAS to do.... Besides, don't we all just loooooove our bad-ass Jack?

Name: Janice (Anonymous) · Datum: 2007.12.21 09:21 · Für: Chapter 6

I'm sorry if I seem overly emotional about this, but I can't believe what a miserable, selfish SOB Jack was - separated for two years without telling her, waiting until John came along and slapped some sense into him.  As usual just dumping the choice of a decision in Sam's lap and just waiting for some sign from her.  I'm surprise she didn't slap him silly and tell him what a miserable SOB he was before she forgave him.  As much as I want them together, he so does not deserve the wonderful, sweet woman she is, after the pain he put her through.  And, of course, the first thing they do is fall into bed together - typical.

Author's Response: Darling, of COURSE it's typical.... hello!!! You forgot who's writing it? Please..... you actually expected originality? I'm touched, i really amd, but cliche, typical smut, without plot, point or purpose id what I do.... *grin* And rather darn proud of it too.... *giggle*..... But yeah, I did think that would be a very WTF moment... I hadn't even thought about it until I was writing the scene.... I was going to have Jack tell her he wants to leave Sara, but then I was like.... oh wait.... hmmm..... ooooooh..... MWAHAHAHAHAHAHA..... 'Twas good ain't it?

Name: Janice (Anonymous) · Datum: 2007.12.21 08:42 · Für: Chapter 4
What a horrible choice for Sam to make.  Go with John and have him for whatever time remains of his life (if Janet is correct) or stay with Jack and be lonely for the rest of her life while keeping "their" secret.  So unfair to Sam.  And even though Sam did it willingly, now both Jack and John have used her for their own needs and she gets nothing but pain for it.  Hard as it would be for her, I think she should leave Jack and move on with her own life.

Author's Response: That would be a rather mature and logical choice for her to make, wouldn't it? But then again.... we wouldn't have a happy ending and S&J smut in all shapes form and.... positions? heh...And that is all that my fics are about really..... But yeah, it was a pretty fucked up choice to make for her.... Added to ze angst.... *nods* I'm rather touched you've thought all these elements  through like you did... I admit my writing logic was far more...... Hmmm how should I put this so I don't sound like a moron.... far more.... smut oriented? Yep, that would do it..... ;p THANK YOU!

Name: Janice (Anonymous) · Datum: 2007.12.21 08:32 · Für: Chapter 3
I don't really know what to say about this story.  It's heartbreaking for one thing.  And so totally unfair to Sam.  To put her life on hold or to not have a personal life because of Jack.  And so selfish of him to keep his marriage and get Sam in his life at the same time, knowing she willingly does it for him, and knowing at this point that he won't leave Sara for her.  I guess they say love is blind if Sam is willing to give up everything for Jack in this reality.

Author's Response: Love is blind and as my sister put it, women are stupid when truly in love.... Well some women, it's reallyunfair to generalize like that..... but I guess Sam totaly fell into that category. But then again when you do love someone, no matter how much better you can have it if you walk away NOTHINg will make you as happy as the man you're in love with. It just won't matter. It's a limbic system issue, really..... if ya really wanna take the romance outof it.... ;p So here here for true love and the misery it puts us through.

Name: Vicki (Anonymous) · Datum: 2007.09.15 13:41 · Für: Chapter 11
Wow! What a great story.  Definately one of your best.  I've enjoyed many of your stories over the years and I really enjoyed this one. I felt like I was really there experiencing your words. You are truly a great writer. (The sex was so hot I had to jump my husband.)  This should win an award!  Keep up the excellent work.

Author's Response: An award you say? Can it be shiny and shaped like a...... well.... like....... ummmm.... Jack's...... ummmm...... staff weapon? *grin* What do you mean he doesn't have a staff weapon? HE DOES TOO!!!! Huge one even! Bigger than Teal'c's!!! I'm glad you liked it. The fic not Jack's staff weapon....Although..... ok ok nevermind...  It felt far more natural to write than the other ones I did.... don't know why.... it just.... wanted to be written if you can say that about  a fic.... THANK YOU!

Name: Veratyr (Signed) · Datum: 2007.09.10 18:33 · Für: Chapter 11
Very well played plot line and development of characters. I would have liked an actually "yes", but that is what sets us appart as writers....YOU have done a great job, keep writing and amazing us with you tallent and imagination! 

Author's Response: I actually find the whole marriage proposal scene painfully cliche (unlike the rest of my fic *cough*) So I went for a bit of "variation" on the yes answer.... I'm glad youliked i.And awww.... you think I have imagination.... *sniffle* how sweet is that.... *sniffle* that's just..... touching..... *sniffle* Thank you.

Name: Veratyr (Signed) · Datum: 2007.09.09 17:53 · Für: Chapter 10
Pra-vo! Well done! I'll read on....

Author's Response: Thank you thank you, please enjoy....

Name: Veratyr (Signed) · Datum: 2007.09.09 17:38 · Für: Chapter 9
 I am so happy, Yes I am! Damn you GOOD! Twists are you specality! I'll keep reading....

Author's Response: Not really, but this whole fic seemed to be...... something else.... I am quite cliche and predictable really.... I plead insanity and some sort of possession to explain how this fic came out to be so...... different..... It was the voices!!! They told me to do things..... *nods*

Name: Veratyr (Signed) · Datum: 2007.09.09 17:12 · Für: Chapter 8
Very moving! I'll read on..

Author's Response: I'm glad youlike the emotional side of it. Hope youlike the rest.

Name: Veratyr (Signed) · Datum: 2007.09.09 16:44 · Für: Chapter 7
Very well done, I'll read on because as you have said, the story continues! Then, I do as well....

Author's Response: Wonderful there's still stuff to be read.... And smut as well..... Have fun.

Name: Veratyr (Signed) · Datum: 2007.09.04 11:56 · Für: Chapter 6
Pra-vo! I Love it, and I'll read on....

Author's Response: Thank you. Please enjoy the rest.

Name: Veratyr (Signed) · Datum: 2007.09.04 11:29 · Für: Chapter 5
Very Moving! I'll read on...

Author's Response: Thank you, please do...

Author's Response: Thank you, please do...

Name: Veratyr (Signed) · Datum: 2007.09.04 09:28 · Für: Chapter 4
Very well done! I love what you have done with the story thus far!

Author's Response: I hope the rest will be just as pleasing. thank you.

Name: Veratyr (Signed) · Datum: 2007.09.02 18:21 · Für: Chapter 3
Totaly cool! I'll keep reading!

Author's Response: Glad you like it. Thank you.

Name: Veratyr (Signed) · Datum: 2007.09.02 17:21 · Für: Chapter 2
I am in love with the plot! You have done such a great job with the characters! The only sugestion i can make is to watch your pronouns, they are a little confusing somtimes. You have tallent that is breath taking, so I will read on...

Author's Response:

Yes, I know the pronoun issue. My beta reader corects that, but I guess sometines they do slip her attention too. I'm glad youlike the story though. Thank you!

Name: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Datum: 2007.09.01 18:59 · Für: Chapter 11
It was an amazing story, loved every bit of it. I have read most of your stories and this one was the best ever. Thanks a lot.  Hope you will write more.

Author's Response: Oh..... wow..... really..... wow..... that's so..... wow.... I really do THANK YOU SO MUCH for those sweet words. Means the world to me. Thank you.

Name: anon (Anonymous) · Datum: 2007.09.01 15:09 · Für: Chapter 1
That was amazingly good.  I don't know how you manage to do angst so well, but it was a perfect read!

Author's Response: Well the angst is easy to do when you're a sick little puppy....... *giggle* I'm happy youl iked it. I really am. Thank you.

Name: iuh (Anonymous) · Datum: 2007.08.31 17:30 · Für: Chapter 11
come on!, that was sooooo good, awesome totally great, is just...God, is perfect. thank you so much for sharing this one.

Author's Response: How could I not share..... it's not like I write these things for me.... I have enough stories in my head tokeep myself entertained... This is about putting the words into stories and putting the stories out there for you guys to enjoy too if you're into them. Thank you.

Name: ziplock (Anonymous) · Datum: 2007.08.31 16:42 · Für: Chapter 10

Author's Response: Awwww, thank you. I'm glad you liked it.

Name: Peter (Anonymous) · Datum: 2007.08.31 16:12 · Für: Chapter 9
WOW!! i love how you can fix everything, youre awesome, and you should defenetly be proud of this history, is...simply fantastic.

Author's Response: Well, i can fix everything cause they're my pupets and I'm ze pupet master!!! mwahahahaha..... and I control them!!! Oh  the power, the ultimate power! I say.... let there be more smut! Eh? That should make everyone happy.... Thank you. Happy you liked it.

Name: Amy (Anonymous) · Datum: 2007.08.31 15:52 · Für: Chapter 8
This isn't supposed to happend....*pout* YOURE EVIL!!, why does John has to suffer so much??....is so sad. btw is really awesome.

Author's Response: He has to suffer cause it'll make for some awsome smut scenes with Sam later after everything is fixed like magic cause this is fanfic and we can make everything go poof all better. It is sad, but the happy resolution will feel more fulfiling this way..... That, plus I'm a sucker for angst.... heh.

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