so glad there was an update :)
Great story but you have got to finish it.
I don't know how much longer I can wait.
stunningly wonderful!
wow your story was amazing it was so good i loved the fact that u did it like between and during the real shows it made it so really like it was accually going on at the same time. and your story was really origional to ive never read one where she gets raped before.
Perfect! I'll read on!
I love the ending of this chapter! LOL, you have put a smile on my face with your plot line and character interaction! I'll read on.
The Tiger's roar cannot be held, Jacks emotions are welling and it is very obvious. Good job! I'll read on.
You have established the routien very well, lets see how the plot carries itself out.
Yes, we are building up to a very large onflict....I cannot wait! I'll read on
Again, your interaction between characters is perfect and profound....I'll keep reading
The ending caught my heart! OMG......I'm almost crying, that means you have done a great job....I'll read on!
The interaction between Sam and Jack is perfect! I'll read on.
Again, very well done! Jacks emotions are very powerful and you have demonstrated that very well, once the tiger is out of his cage, it is hard to ask him back in. I'll read on.
PLEASE BRING ON MORE OF IT WAS JUST GREAT
I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE OF THE STORY
I'm really enjoying the whole story. I can hardly wait to see if and how Jack's words about thing blowing up in their face come back to haunt them. More please!!!!!!
Very good chapter! I loved how you melded your story with the actual episode. The double meaning in the discussion at the bottom of the ramp was great. The writing is, as always, amazingly wonderful. You keep the characters really believeable. I am really enjoying this. Thank you for all of the new chapters to read!
Again, what can I say. very well done! I'll read on!
I love the Sam/Teal'c interaction, however I am not quite convinced that Teal'c would end the conversation that way, yet we have also never seen Teal'c in that kind of situation before. You have painted a beautiful picture in my mind of the situation, yet have not convinced me of Teal'c character...I believe that he is the hardest to write about! So don't sweat it! Your writing is beautiful! I shall read on!
All I can say; very well done!
Also very well done! The control that Jack uses is very rare and only proves his genuine character, i'll read on!
Sorry it has taken me so long to logon and to finish reading your wonderful story. This chapter is very well writen, the character interaction is true to each individual and also the plot line. It happens so many times that fan writers develop the plot, yet do not keep the integrity of the characters. You have done very well! I will read on!
This is a great story, Grizziesmom. I especially like your use of canon in this chapter. And everyday it's the same thing, did it get updated today!
Thanks for all your hard work, can't wait for more!
Yay! Can't wait for the next installment!
Great work!
Wow, I totally got hooked on the first paragraph. Mainly because it immediately catches your attention with the hint that something horrible may have happened. But at the same times it relieves some of the anxiety the reader experiences when worrying about Sam. That little comment about jack's gem sort of refers to one of Jack's many idiosyncrasies, one being his tendency to remark sarcastically to difficult and stressful situations. (I apologize if my review is a little off. I'm completely and utterly exhausted. Also, I can barely even think about what I'm typing. Again I apologize)
This is really good. I'm hooked. I can't believe it is 1am and I haven't finished feeding dogs and horses! I only intended to read one chapter and read the whole thing. Please post more. Can't you hear Jack and Sam saying... "Finish us... Finish our story..."
Seriously, you have created a great story that is very much character driven. You move the story along at just the right pace so that their actions seem very true to what they might have done. More please. I am channeling my inner Jack "Write more now... Thats an order" :-)
Author's Response: Here's hoping you got your chores done and some sleep too! Thanks for the psoitive feedback...as following orders, I'm doing some cleaniing up on the next couple chapters....might be a couple days, sorry....But I'll do my best to fill the space ASAP.