Name: ALIMOO1971 (Signed) · Datum: 2008.05.03 23:32 · Für: Chapter 17 - And We're Outa Here
great chapter, Sam sure knew what she was doing when she 'baited' jack into the cooking bet, lol

Name: ALIMOO1971 (Signed) · Datum: 2008.05.03 23:25 · Für: Chapter 16 - Kidnapped and Goodbye
great chapter

Name: ALIMOO1971 (Signed) · Datum: 2008.05.03 23:23 · Für: Chapter 15 - Time for Vacation
greeat chapter, i wounder what if Sam said 'yes' before he was beam away, lol

Name: ALIMOO1971 (Signed) · Datum: 2008.05.03 23:19 · Für: Chapter 14 - Exploration
Great chapter, sounds like Jack going to miss having Sam at his place but how far away is his place to the house?

Name: ALIMOO1971 (Signed) · Datum: 2008.05.03 23:13 · Für: Chapter 13 - Still Waiting
great chapter, Jack sure knows Sam all to well

Name: ALIMOO1971 (Signed) · Datum: 2008.05.03 22:24 · Für: Chapter 12- I HATE Waiting
Great chapter, so jack found Sam a house, sweet

Name: ALIMOO1971 (Signed) · Datum: 2008.05.03 22:21 · Für: Chapter 11 - Nintendos?
Great chapter

Name: ALIMOO1971 (Signed) · Datum: 2008.05.03 22:18 · Für: Chapter 10 - In Trouble Again
Great chapter, i remeber that episode

Name: ALIMOO1971 (Signed) · Datum: 2008.05.03 22:14 · Für: Chapter 9 - Still Can't Go Home
Greeat chapter, Daniel timing sucks once again, lol

Name: ALIMOO1971 (Signed) · Datum: 2008.05.03 22:06 · Für: Chapter 8 - Remembering
Great chapter, i wounder why Sam hasn't look for another place since now she back on her feet?

Name: ALIMOO1971 (Signed) · Datum: 2008.05.03 22:01 · Für: Chapter 7 - A Day in the Sun
great chapter, dam there gose there R&R. Oh well i'm sure Hammond would make it up to them later

Name: ALIMOO1971 (Signed) · Datum: 2008.05.03 21:54 · Für: Chapter 6 - The Set Up
Great chapter, so they are going off world, sweet, i like the part where Sam said "See i know there was a catch" that was funny exspeacily when they were talking about fishing

Name: ALIMOO1971 (Signed) · Datum: 2008.05.03 21:43 · Für: Chapter 5 - Settling In
Great chapter, it good to know that they both are talking about the rape and what happen to him over in iran.

Name: ALIMOO1971 (Signed) · Datum: 2008.05.03 21:29 · Für: Chapter 4 - You Can't Go Home
Great chapter, poor Sam, at les Jack is there for her

Name: ALIMOO1971 (Signed) · Datum: 2008.05.03 21:12 · Für: Chapter 3 - Home and Hearth
oh it looks like Sam is going to Jack cabin for some R&R. At lest he knows how to cheer her up

Name: ALIMOO1971 (Signed) · Datum: 2008.05.03 21:06 · Für: Chapter 2 - Broken Woman
Great chater, Daniel got the worse timing, lol. Jack getting all mushy on Sam, i bet she would let him for get it when she is back on her feet, lol

Name: ALIMOO1971 (Signed) · Datum: 2008.05.03 20:19 · Für: Chapter 1 - Discovery Is Deadly
Great first chapter, i wounder who the guy was?

Name: Meagan (Anonymous) · Datum: 2008.04.15 23:43 · Für: Chapter 37 - Home at Last

Very, very good story but a 'I want to strangle you' ending. But, still, a very good story. Keep on writing!!

Meagan (StargateSg-1Fan4Life)

Name: KrisK (Anonymous) · Datum: 2008.02.13 15:49 · Für: Chapter 37 - Home at Last
Very nice. Worth waiting for.

Name: jeanieofoz (Anonymous) · Datum: 2008.02.11 16:54 · Für: Chapter 37 - Home at Last
love you! pleawe keep writing!

Name: samcarterrules (Signed) · Datum: 2008.02.11 11:23 · Für: Chapter 37 - Home at Last

That was a great chapter. I re-read all the chapters again because it had been a while, I loved it even more on a second read-through. I was wondering are you going to let Sam finish having sex with Jack this time? I only ask, not as a criticism, but because I have been in Sam's place and she would probably still have flashbacks at this point, it would be jack's ability to talk to her, to reach her in her flashback and bring her back to reality and reassure her.

I don't mean to presume you haven't had a personal experience of this and the things I have said are nothing more than my own experiences. I will wait with baited breath for your next chapter.

Thank You again for writing this great story.


Name: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Datum: 2007.12.31 06:44 · Für: Chapter 1 - Discovery Is Deadly
I hope you intend to continue this story as you have put it as part of a series?

Name: AT fan (Anonymous) · Datum: 2007.12.24 19:21 · Für: Chapter 36 - Upgrades and Emotions
great story so far. Love the interaction between those two and the fact that Jack is allowing Sam to recover before they attempt to make love very realistic.

Name: KeturahDedan (Signed) · Datum: 2007.11.21 08:46 · Für: Chapter 36 - Upgrades and Emotions
I finally got together the time to finish your story. Very nicely done by the way. I'm looking forward to more.

Name: KrisK (Signed) · Datum: 2007.11.20 07:39 · Für: Chapter 36 - Upgrades and Emotions

Wonderful chapter!  You did a great job with the emotions of the story.  I loved it.  Glad to see more.

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