Name: DR67 (Anonymous) · Datum: 2012.02.26 13:33 · Für: Chapter 1 - Discovery Is Deadly
Quite a story there. Can't wait for updates.

Name: yol (Signed) · Datum: 2012.02.02 21:06 · Für: Chapter 42 - Windows of Opportunites
Glad to fine this chapter, liked this extension to the story. Thanks for sharing.

Name: yol (Signed) · Datum: 2012.02.01 21:26 · Für: Chapter 42 - Windows of Opportunites
Read this story long ago and want to know if there is a chapter 42 cause I can't see this chapter when I click on it.  Thought this was really a great story and even now since I reread it.  Let me know if there is a chapter 42.

Name: Awishaway (Signed) · Datum: 2012.01.30 12:53 · Für: Chapter 42 - Windows of Opportunites
Was so happy to see more chapters up for this story. Really been enjoying it and look forward to seing how it all ends, Geat story and great reading. Keep up the awesome work.

Name: SJShipper (Signed) · Datum: 2009.09.11 10:57 · Für: Chapter 1 - Discovery Is Deadly
Ok, so this is my first review, and I'm not an editor or anything, so please bear with me. I first just want to say, I hope you continue to write this story line. I'm new to fan fic, but this story has been so riviting on so many different levels - I'm going to go back and rewatch the involved episodes, just to enjoy them again with fresh eyes that this *may* have been going on behind the scenes... Your development of their personal relationship has been amazing, and following Sam's healing process through Jack's unwavering love and support has given me, personally, a way to heal from my own tramatic experiences in an abusive relationship. So thank you...  Very powerful, very real, excellent work...  I did notice in one of the chapters Jake changed to Dave, which took me out of the story for a bit, but was easily overcome... And I was actually impressed with how easily you handled Sam's emotionality throughout the story. I would have expected to be dissatisfied with our happy, tough, strong Sam showing so much *weakness*. You reminded me tears and emotionality aren't weakness, they are a part of healing and dealing with life. And truly, it takes a lot of inner strength to show to those whose opinion of you matters. As a true S/J Shipper, I hate the idea of them seperating, but it might strengthen the story to continue with the canon of the episodes... And does it have to end? Thanks for many hours of much more than just mindless entertainment - although there may be a time and place for that too - your story has been a journey of depth, healing, growth and love. And as an aside, your love scenes have been sooo hot, I *almost* wish AT and RDA were porn stars, just so I could watch them with more than my mind's eye! Phew! OK, I'm off for my own cold shower now... lol

Author's Response:
So sorry it has taken so l ong to respond.  Once again, life has gotten the better of me and I've had to set Jack and Sam and my version of their story to the side for a while...quite a while, it seems as I see my last official update was over a year and a half ago...yikes!
Anyway, it's responses like your that keep me writing, so thanks very much for that.  I too hate to see this end, which is why I think I've had such a hard time continuing the story.  I've been trying very hard to stick to the original canon story...but knowing that Jack and Sam separate is killing me...My theory is that eventually they get back together...but not until MUCH later in the series than where I am right now.
I promise, I am working on getting on with the story...please bear with me...and again, thanks for your wonderful comment! - Grizziesmom

Name: ALIMOO1971 (Signed) · Datum: 2008.05.04 20:13 · Für: Chapter 37 - Home at Last
Great chapter and story, at lest the bed was christen, lol. Keep up the good work

Name: ALIMOO1971 (Signed) · Datum: 2008.05.04 20:07 · Für: Chapter 36 - Upgrades and Emotions
Great chapter, it was a shame that the arm bands fell off early and they have al return back safe and sound

Name: ALIMOO1971 (Signed) · Datum: 2008.05.04 19:57 · Für: Chapter 35 - The Kiss
Great chapter, well it looks like Sam bed going to take a bit longer to get together, lol

Name: ALIMOO1971 (Signed) · Datum: 2008.05.04 19:49 · Für: Chapter 34 - Moving In
Great chapter, it good to know that they both had a talk and Daniel happy for them

Name: ALIMOO1971 (Signed) · Datum: 2008.05.04 19:44 · Für: Chapter 33 - Waiting for a Delivery
Great chapter, it looks like Sam might be having a house warming party with the guys

Name: ALIMOO1971 (Signed) · Datum: 2008.05.04 19:38 · Für: Chapter 32 - Contact from the Other Side
Great chapter, i thought that they would of been bed shopping?

Name: ALIMOO1971 (Signed) · Datum: 2008.05.04 19:35 · Für: Chapter 31 - Making Plans...House Plans
Great chapter, it good that they were flirting, shame about Daniel timing, lol

Name: ALIMOO1971 (Signed) · Datum: 2008.05.04 19:30 · Für: Chapter 30 - Death, the Small Victory?
Great chapter, it was a shame about what happen to the asgard new ship

Name: ALIMOO1971 (Signed) · Datum: 2008.05.04 19:21 · Für: Chapter 29 - Not Going Fishing...Again
Great chapter

Name: ALIMOO1971 (Signed) · Datum: 2008.05.04 19:09 · Für: Chapter 28 - What's going on here?
Great chapter, Sam sure looking ford to her doohickies and Jack going fishing... again, lol

Name: ALIMOO1971 (Signed) · Datum: 2008.05.04 19:06 · Für: Chapter 27 - It's About Time!!!
Great chapter, they sure are happy to be home again, lol

Name: ALIMOO1971 (Signed) · Datum: 2008.05.04 18:37 · Für: Chapter 26 - The Wake Up Call
Great chapter

Name: ALIMOO1971 (Signed) · Datum: 2008.05.04 18:34 · Für: Chapter 25 - Wake Up, Little Sammie
Great chapter, it looks like her healing is going to take longer

Name: ALIMOO1971 (Signed) · Datum: 2008.05.04 18:24 · Für: Chapter 24 - Tell Me It Ain't So
Great chapter :-D

Name: ALIMOO1971 (Signed) · Datum: 2008.05.04 18:18 · Für: Chapter 23 - Jack's Shower
Great chapter at lest it a good start for Sam recovery and teasing Jack at the same time, lol

Name: ALIMOO1971 (Signed) · Datum: 2008.05.04 18:10 · Für: Chapter 22 - Teal'c's Confession
Great chapter, that path to the water fall must be warn in by now, lol

Name: ALIMOO1971 (Signed) · Datum: 2008.05.04 18:06 · Für: Chapter 21 - The Waterfall - Day
great chapter, you got this chapter up twice

Name: ALIMOO1971 (Signed) · Datum: 2008.05.04 17:56 · Für: Chapter 20 - Not Right Now!
great chapter, i wounder what he want to show Sam?

Name: ALIMOO1971 (Signed) · Datum: 2008.05.04 17:46 · Für: Chapter 19 - At the Waterfall - Night
Great chapter, at lest they talk and who knows what else they might get up to before returning back home, lol

Name: ALIMOO1971 (Signed) · Datum: 2008.05.04 17:35 · Für: Chapter 18 - MIA
Great chapter, it good that Jack went looking for Sam, he knows her all to well

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