Name: wintermoon (Signed) · Datum: 2011.11.05 22:29 · Für: Two Halves of a Whole - Deepest Desires
I found this interesting at first, but gave up about halfway through because the formatting of characters' thoughts has actually removed their thoughts. You might want to re-upload this. I'm sure the story would make more sense and be even more interesting with those thouse visible.

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