First of all, don't like the script format - not easy to read. Secondly, don't really care for the new characters. I'm a S/J girl and that's what I read for. I am interested in the Jen/Jack/Sam triangle and will read more if that's addressed. Not a Vala fan at all and hate having to learn new characters - that's the beauty of fanfiction - you're reading about old friends - and I don't have a clue who Ali and all those others are. If you address Jack/Jen then I will read those chapters. Otherwise, can't get too into this series. Give me the original Sg-1 - even IF it has to include whiney Daniel.
Good story BUT, as far as I'm concerned, Jen raped Jack. I sure hope she won't get preggo and that she takes her shots. It would be a real shame and I doubt Sam would survive this, she wants a baby from Jack so much and they went through hell getting where they're at. Sam would never leave Jack because she loves him so much but I fear that, if Jack knew, he'd have trouble dealing with this...Plse no preggo Jen, I beg you...
Just came back to add a rating. Great Story!
There are so many things I really enjoy about this series, and this story in particular.
Through out SG1 and beyond to SGU we have seen how Jack and Sam are often forced to carry on with the mission even when one of them is missing or hurt. To see how they are now as a married couple was touching. It is an unfortunate twist that Maj. Hailey has got in the middle, and I see trouble ahead for them.
Also we see how much Cam depends on his new team members. MJ's roll (not just as the twin of Vanessa James or the guy who is in love with an alien)is explored more.
Also we get to see Daniel as the true friend is, to vala, Jack and Sam. And how important they are to him.
I know I don't usually get all deep with the reviews, but I wanted you to know how much I am truly enjoying this series. I can't wait for the next story!
This story is so good! My Jack was trapped with that girl! And now for the trouble. Sam so worried and Daniel. This story for stargate I love.