This one hell of story. Excellent job. Very emotional and very realistic. So realistic that at one point I had to step away from the story because it was getting to me.
Excellent job.
Please, keep writing!
awsome. this is really real feeling and detailed about a piece of Jack's life that has not been delved into. Bravo.
awsome. this is really real feeling and detailed about a piece of Jack's life that has not been delved into. Bravo.
I think they put the wrong story in this slot? It's about Jack/Sara. Interesting, though.