I was happy to find the next story posted so soon! This is one of my favorites (for obvious reasons) even tho it doesn't have a lot of Jack and Sam. I thought Jack was hillarious in the last chapter. You're depiction of him was spot on.
I like that you picked JL as the inspiration for Dr. Sinclair.
Vala is one wild child. If anyone was going to get freaky with the natives, it figures it might be her. The Vala/Cam storyline is awesome. Can't wait to see what's going to happen between them.
Can't wait for the next story! Great Job!
I will admit, the picture made me look. The first Chapter is smoking, so I can tell that the rest is going to be too. I realise this is a series so I am going to go back and read them before I read any more. If this first chapter is an indication then i will have some enjoyable reading for a while.
Just from reading the 1st chapter, I must say Way to Go Daniel. Wow. And in the pic, it looks like the girl from Cloverfield and Melrose. She is very pretty. Is this the new Dr. (Daniel's Girl friend)and is Carolyne still with the SGC?
Thank you for the review! I'm so glad you're going to read the series. There are a couple of things that are spoilers if you read this one first. Also the first story in the series will give you a lot of information about why certain couples are together and other couples are not. I really wanted to create something different while still letting Jack and Sam have their happy ending (so to speak) I hope you enjoy the series, and I love getting reviews.
Oh and yes about the actress in the picture. My hubby AT has a huge crush on her so I figured I would use her as the muse for the new character. Plus ahe fits what the character should look like ( a bit of a look a like younger version of Sha're which will become an issue in future stories )
This was very erotica story I like. Why not Jack and Sam going to this planet for fun sex. Maybe in future story jajaja! Sorry Sam not in SG1 team any more she would be sexy there and Jack so handsome would be sexy there to. I like all the story from the first one to now is very good and sexy. I like sexy Vala and Cameron and Daniel Jackson. And new ones is very good to.
I am glad you liked it. I was in the mood to write something really raunchy and beautiful all at the same time, when i came up with this story. I tried to find a way to put Jack and Sam in this one, but I could not make it work with the storyline of the whole series. I am thinking about having the couple visit the planet in the future to conduct some negotiations. Thanks for the review!