In this chapter, you have General Hammond saying that Sgt Siler had an accident which caused them to be uanble to use the stargate, but in an earlier chapter you had Sgt Siler in the infirmary at the new Alpha Site...did he get cloned?
Awesome story I think you did a great job with this and I am looking forward to reading more from you.
Well one had to know all couldn't be so simple for these two. Great story and like the struggle presented to them. Wouldn't want to give up what she has with Jack either. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: thanks heaps, i just finished it, and i've started on my next story
Enjoyed what has been posted so far. Interesting story and like the twist on the asteroid story. Though I would think they would have sent the President through along with a few others Hammond aswell but other than that it is good reading and I am looking forward to reading more.
Author's Response: yeah in the spisode General Hammond told Jack that he wasn't being sent through, i hadn't even thought about the President or even the joint cheifs... hmm oh well i'm just gonna pretend they dnt exist lol. ignore my problems and all that!
The premise seems really exciting, but I am having trouble reading(make that, I can't read)it due to the lack of formatting. I would love it if you could get it into paragraph format.
Author's Response: hmm, not sure i kno wat to do to help you... give instructions and ill do wat i can, i just cut and paste from a word document