Name: fadetoblackandblue (Signed) · Datum: 2012.01.26 19:43 · Für: Chapter 12: Cam and Vala Under Cover
Great!!! AO bits are Excelent!

Name: fadetoblackandblue (Signed) · Datum: 2012.01.26 19:41 · Für: Chapter 11: Evan and Carolyn (2011)
I really like all the AO parts for all the characters, but the C&E scenes are off the hook!!!

Name: fadetoblackandblue (Signed) · Datum: 2012.01.26 19:40 · Für: Chapter 9: Cam,Carolyn,Vala and Daniel...The Shake Up.
Story is mushed together in the middle & needs to be formatted, but still really good. Very HOT!

Name: fadetoblackandblue (Signed) · Datum: 2012.01.26 19:38 · Für: Chapter 8: Daniel and Carolyn (June 2009)
from reading the FF version, I had no idea things came so close between  C&D. Nicely done! I do wish I had read this first before reading the second story. I should have looked. haha.

Author's Response: Thank You for the reviews. I couldn't resist giving Carolyn and Daniel a little bit of a romance. Glad you liked it.

Name: Pink Patches (Anonymous) · Datum: 2012.01.25 09:02 · Für: Chapter 2: Cam and Carolyn & Jack and Sam
LOVE the Mitchell and Carolyne elevator scene! I can totaly see that happening! Again VERY HOT!

Author's Response: Yay! I like that the scenes are HOT! Thank you for the review. Glad you enjoyed it.

Name: Pink Patches (Anonymous) · Datum: 2012.01.25 08:57 · Für: Chapter 1: Jack and Sam 2005
Nice chapter. short and sweet. Very HOT!!

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