Ive read this story and its sequel on another site that was loss, and so glad to see it here too. This I really enjoyed, its one of my most favorite, thanks for sharing here for us.
I can't wait for A Hero's Return!!!!!!!!!! Amazing story!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Okay, the sequel is all posted. Please let us know what you think. Thanx for reviewing! Reviews and reviewers are priceless!
wow this is a great story i really like it
Thank you! If you want to read other stories I've written, just go here. Pauline has co-authored only one other story.
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MORE MORE MORE!!!!!! I like this story!!!
Author's Response: I usually post one chapter per day, so you will get more tomorrow. Thanx for the great review!
I really like this story, but I have to admit that Sam's behavior is seriously starting to annoy me. First she breaks Jack's heart and then she deceives Jack about the baby. I gotta say I think that Daniel, Teal'c, and Janet make for rotten friends. If I were Jack I wouldn't forgive any of them. That said, you are doing a great job with the characters and this storyline. Please write faster. I can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response: You had me worried for a minute. I'm glad you are willing to put up with how poorly everyone is handling this, although I really don't think it's anyone's place to tell Jack about DJ. Thank you for reviewing!
At last I get to review. Hooray!! What an excellent story, it has everything that I like, plenty of angst, drama. And the sex scenes are brillient. I look forward to reading much more
Thank you from the bottom of our hearts, LuLu. Love your name, btw. ;)