Reviews For Fallen Hero

Name: yol (Anonymous) · Datum: 2012.04.23 21:52 · Für: Chapter 16
Ive read this story and its sequel on another site that was loss, and so glad to see it here too.  This I really enjoyed, its one of my  most favorite, thanks for sharing here  for us.

Name: Harley 168 (Signed) · Datum: 2010.06.06 00:43 · Für: Chapter 16
I can't wait for A Hero's Return!!!!!!!!!!  Amazing story!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Okay, the sequel is all posted. Please let us know what you think.  Thanx for reviewing!  Reviews and reviewers are priceless! 

Name: mia (Anonymous) · Datum: 2010.05.30 17:50 · Für: Chapter 1
wow this is a great story i really like it 

Author's Response:

Thank you!  If you want to read other stories I've written, just go here.  Pauline has co-authored only one other story. 


Thanks for your review!  It is appreciated very much!


Name: Harley 168 (Signed) · Datum: 2010.05.30 05:42 · Für: Chapter 9
MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!  I like this story!!!

Author's Response: I usually post one chapter per day, so you will get more tomorrow.  Thanx for the great review!

Name: sgo (Anonymous) · Datum: 2010.05.29 17:50 · Für: Chapter 9

I really like this story, but I have to admit that Sam's behavior is seriously starting to annoy me. First she breaks Jack's heart and then she deceives Jack about the baby. I gotta say I think that Daniel, Teal'c, and Janet make for rotten friends. If I were Jack I wouldn't forgive any of them. That said, you are doing a great job with the characters and this storyline. Please write faster. I can't wait for the next chapter

Author's Response: You had me worried for a minute.  I'm glad you are willing to put up with how poorly everyone is handling this, although I really don't think it's anyone's place to tell Jack about DJ.  Thank you for reviewing!

Name: LuLu (Signed) · Datum: 2010.05.27 12:23 · Für: Chapter 7
At last I get to review. Hooray!! What an excellent story, it has everything that I like, plenty of angst, drama. And the sex scenes are brillient.  I look forward to reading much more

Author's Response:

Thank you from the bottom of our hearts, LuLu.  Love your name, btw.   ;)

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