I was reading this on the Sam and Jack always and forever site and I didn't remember getting to read the last chapter before it ran into trouble. But I am so glad I found it on here to read. Loved this story so very much and believe an epilogue to wrap up all the loose ends and see how they worked it all out in their same shared time line would be nice. But awesome job on this story. Great reading and very entertaining. You are a tremendous writer and I greatly enjoy reading your stories. Thank you for writing them and especially thank you for posting on more than one site.
Author's Response: Glad you found me on this site. I am also on a couple of others. I really miss the Jack and Sam site. I hope that Siler is ok and nothing terrible happen to him. This is my favorite of the stories I've writtien (also my first so that might have something to do with it lol). I love hearing that people are still reading it. Thank you for the review and all the kind words. You made my day!!
Love, love, love, love, love this story! I even had this image of Charlie looking like Dean and then you go and mention the Winchesters and I had to chuckle to myself. I must confess though, I was quite frustrated with you and how you wrote the dilemma of the memories of Colonel Jack being lost. I kept thinking "Download him into the Asgard mainframe! Download him into the Asgard mainframe! They have the technology!" But still, I like the drama of how you wrote it. It really pulled me in. Nicely done. Awesome job. Two thumbs up. :D
Author's Response: Thank you for the awesome review. That's funny about Dean and Charlie. Colonel Jack's memories weren't lost. Jack retained both sets of memories. I thought about downloading him, but then I wasn't sure what to do with the memories. Why would the Jack now want them? I can't see Colonel Jack wanting to allow that either. I'm glad you still enjoyed the story anyway. I have a few other's I need to post here. Thanks for reading!
I've search and read a lot of other fanfics, I must say yours is the best. You are actually in the top ten along with other stories such as soul mates, I read this one too and nothing compares to yours. I cannot believe such a story as soul mates would make it to the top ten. You should be the role model every fanfiction writer should have.
The way you sensed the characters' psychology and developped them is incredible. There is no rush as we can sometimes find at the end of long stories, but it's not boring long like some other storie can sometime be.
It's a real good job you did with this story. I think you have some really great potential and you should not waste it, go on and write some more. i'm actually your fan ( and I must say I am very hard to please)
Author's Response: I haven't been on this site in forever. I just got on because I got a notice that I had a review on one of my other stories. This was such a great review I am sorry that I never replied to you. I am usually good about replying to everyone that takes the time to leave me comments and yours were amazing. Thank you for all of your kind words!
Really good story--enjoyed the read.
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed.
hey can you post the other story you've written.i'm dying to read it!!!pleeeaazzzee
What an amazing story!
It's actually better than the movie!
You're a very skilled writer, and I would love to read more of your work.
This is hands down the best fanfic I've ever read.
your character development, and their personalities are perfect.
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much for the awesome review. Better than the movie?? wow that is incredibly high praise. Thank you. I've written another complete story and am just starting to post one short one. I will get them both posted here this weekend. Thank you again.
oh yeah please post the other story, I'm looking forward to reading it.
I think it's the best fanfiction I have ever read!!! Where do I start?
It's well written, the science is well explained, the challenges the characters undergo are so well constructed from the beginning until the end.
The story takes its time to elaborate and it's not out of the blue as some other stories can be sometimes. When O'neill rejects Carter at the beginning it's so heartbreaking.
The sex scenes are also so credible and really correspond to Sam and Jack's characters and who they are and to where they come from ( I mean, you took them as they were after the end of the show and developped them from there)
The sex scenes are also well detailed as we like them but the story is not all about it and there's much more than sex and a frame set.
Really good job, congrats !!!!
Author's Response: Thank you for such an awesome review! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. This was the first fanfiction I ever wrote and I was really nervous about posting it so everyone's comments mean a great deal. Thank you. I have one more story finished and will post it here this afternoon. Thanks again for reading and letting me know what you thought!
loved it ..........
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it! Thank you so much.
I just sat and read this instead of writing an essay for uni. really shouldn't have however read the first chapter and was hooked. think it is one of the best continuum fics i've read. want to read the rest though.......... please post the rest soooon. thanks for distracting me from essay writing.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the awesome review. I just posted the rest. You're welcome on the distracting!
please post the rest!!! I'm dying here =)
Author's Response: I'm sorry... hopefully this will bring you back to life. lol I posted the rest of the story.
quick reminder! ;)
love love love the story and the way you bring them together!!
please post the last chapters, please!
Author's Response: Thank you! OK posting now, sorry.
i really like your story!are you planning to keep going?
i would love to read more - keep going!!
Author's Response: This story is finished. Thank you so much for the review. To tell you the truth, I had a little technical difficulty with the site (my technological deficiency, not a site problem) and forgot to finish posting. I haven't had much response on the site so I sort of forgot about it. I will get it posted. I just put three chapters up but have to run out. If you don't see the rest go up quickly just give me a quick reminder and I will get the rest posted. Thanks you so much for the review!!!!
More, more, MOREEE. XD. I really enjoy this story. I love the way Sam and Jack are going with their relationship. I want to know how what happens. Keep going and good luck.
Kisses and thank you.
Author's Response: Thank you for the awesome review. I wasn't going to post until tomorrow but you made me smile so I'm posting now.
This story is fantastic! Your writing is excellent and I can't wait to read the rest!
Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I'm posting another chapter right now.
This last one was a cliff hanger! Excellent timing on when to end the chapter. It gets better and better. You are a great writer, keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Sorry for the delay in posting... I had computer, well actually internet connection problems. Thank you for the review. There's another chapter up.
This is really good, I can't wait to find out what happens when he looks at all her personal files
Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I'll have another chapter up today.
This is a really good story.I really like it...
Please update soon..
Author's Response: Thank you. I'll have another update tomorrow!
please, please, please update! |This is too good to spend weeks waiting!
Author's Response: This is the first fanfiction that I've ever written, but I've read lots and I hate waiting for updates so I won't make you wait long. I will never go longer than a week between updates - don't worry. I have enough written to put out about a chapter a day at this point. Thank you for the review.
More, more, MOREEEE. :D. Great job. Please, keep going. Congrats. Bye and good luck.
Author's Response: Thank you. I'll have more up soon.
This is very good, you have managed to capture AU Jack extremely well. Please keep up with the posts. It's so good to read something so original.
Author's Response: Thank you. I'll have another chapter out soon!
I love the back and forth between Jack and Sam. You really seem to have a handle on the characters. I can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you. I'll have more out soon.
Very interesting start. Please post more
Author's Response: Thank you. I have quite a bit done so I'll get it out pretty fast.