Loved your story.
There was a very effective sense of dark realism here. I mean that your characters seemed like a slightly darker version of those on the show. It was more than effective and a wonderful device.
Excellent job.
I am glad I had the opportunity to read the whole series all at once. I was not too crazy about where it seemed to be going. Now that I have finished all the stories, I am really glad I kept going. Great job. Thanks for re-posting.