Name: VGWrite (Anonymous) · Datum: 2010.03.28 18:17 · Für: Chapter 21 & Epilogue

That was just fantastic.  I loved the story, thought it was engaging and easy to follow.

I am also thrilled that Jacob is, indeed, alive.  Everyone loves some Jacob Carter.

I look forward to the sequel. 

Name: Gen Varel (Anonymous) · Datum: 2010.01.18 13:49 · Für: Chapter 21 & Epilogue

Loved the revealing ending.  Her father was the one that had ordered her surveillance, and eventually brought her into the fold.  Masterful!

Name: Gen Varel (Anonymous) · Datum: 2010.01.18 13:38 · Für: Chapter 20

So Jack picked which one he wanted.  He never stood a chance, huh?  It was meant to be.

Name: Gen Varel (Anonymous) · Datum: 2010.01.18 12:45 · Für: Chapter 17

Love how Samantha is true to her feisty nature despite her lack of military training.

Name: Gen Varel (Anonymous) · Datum: 2010.01.18 12:17 · Für: Chapter 10

Great action!

Name: Gen Varel (Anonymous) · Datum: 2010.01.18 12:09 · Für: Chapter 8

George?!!!  Oh, my Lord!

Name: Gen Varel (Anonymous) · Datum: 2010.01.18 12:06 · Für: Chapter 7

The plot thickens.  Intrigued.

Name: Gen Varel (Anonymous) · Datum: 2010.01.18 11:36 · Für: Chapter 5

Great!  A murder mystery!  This story is getting better each chapter I read.

Name: Gen Varel (Anonymous) · Datum: 2010.01.18 10:32 · Für: Chapter 3

Love the tension between S&J already.

Name: Gen Varel (Anonymous) · Datum: 2010.01.18 10:21 · Für: Chapter 2

Interesting beginning and very well written.  A little confused, though.  Shouldn't that be Paul DAVIS?  Or are we talking of the young and cute Lieutenant Simmons from the early seasons, now promoted to Major (so soon?)?

Name: weebabyturtles (Anonymous) · Datum: 2008.08.19 19:24 · Für: Chapters 14 & 15

I love the story so far, but I think you loaded the same chapter twice here, and I'm afraid to read ahead and get spoilers....are the chapters correct?

Author's Response:

Hi

Chapters are right.  Ch 14 was originally less than 400 words.  This site won't allow such a short chapter so I combined the two.

 

Thanks for reading.

 

squib 

 

Name: bailunrui (Anonymous) · Datum: 2008.08.16 17:40 · Für: Chapter 10

I love this story and I can't wait for you to upload more chapters!

Author's Response: Thanks!  New chapter up right now!

Name: chrissy (Anonymous) · Datum: 2008.08.16 07:44 · Für: Chapter 8

i love it. i cn't wait for you to update it. one quick question does jacob still join the tok'ra?

Author's Response: Thanks for reading.   All I'll write is keep reading!