Name: PaulineFitz (Anonymous) ·
Datum: 2008.04.14 02:49 ·
Für: Chapter 2
I just love stories about "100 days" it was my favourite, I always thought Jack got off too lightly, he should have been made to suffer a bit more, can't wait for your interpretation of it, update soon please.
Name: IggyMing (Anonymous) ·
Datum: 2008.04.13 17:12 ·
Für: Chapter 2
Very good effort for a first story. I'm really enjoying the angst. Please post more.
Name: GenJacksGirl (Signed) ·
Datum: 2008.04.11 18:11 ·
Für: Chapter 2
Well, I'm certainly hooked, I can't wait to read what happens next!
Name: Bucky (Anonymous) ·
Datum: 2008.04.10 19:34 ·
Für: Chapter 2
Oooh. I hope she shuts the door right in his face. I'm up for a nice long angstfest.
Name: yahaira (Anonymous) ·
Datum: 2008.04.10 14:07 ·
Für: Chapter 2
i like it, but could you please put an extra line between paragraphs? this formatting is hard to read.
Name: Bucky (Anonymous) ·
Datum: 2008.04.08 19:20 ·
Für: Chapter 1
It says "complete," but there's got to be more. What happens when they get on the other side of the gate?