More, more, more!!!
I like your writing style, and this has a promising start, I really hope you decide to finish it!
it was good I want to find out more
hi are there more chapters to the storey , if so look forward to reading in full
I'm hoping this story will be carried on, good idea and well written with good character insight
OWWWW COME ONNNN, you said thath before... i want to know. :D. Keep going.
Bye bye for now. Thanks.
Great interesting first chapter, poor Jack he really mises Sam
oh....
when ae you gonna continue it.??
oh, come on !!!!. I really need to know more of this history...pleaseee????. jajajja. Seriously, so far is great.
I am from argentina, sorry for my writing...i am learning.
good luck and please, i need more of this.
thank.
wow, that was really really good.
but you cant leave it liek taht :S:S
i want to know how it wends now so badly.
one of my fave fan fics so far though yap
PLEASE DON'T LEAVE IT LIKE THIS