Damn this stuff is good.  Telkena, I've always loved your work and I just wanted to say "WOW!!!!!"  Your work is so awesome and I love how you almost always have Jack and Sam together.  I like it when they are together cuz I've seen all 10 seasons of SG-1 and I've always wanted to see them together.

That was pretty darn good. I definitely had a reaction. Emotional of course. But yeah, it was definitely a very detailed and solid story. It had me really hooked. I love Jack/Samantha stories. Well, Jack and anyone really. He is really freakin' hot. *gets starry eyed* Though I can point out something very very minor. For sleeping together they wouldn't be necessarily prosecuted. The military just basically threatens that in situations like this. It's like an unwritten rule, not 100 percent grounds for court marshaling someone. But other than that, definite an good. And you really had the thoughts of both Jack and Sam down pretty tight. It takes a talented writer to be able to write both male and female thoughts, especially when dealing with sexual content. Ok, I'm done with this review, way too long I know.

esta increible!!! is awesome, bit short coming from you but still great!, thks por posting and keep writing

very good