My God!!. Jack can be this evil realy?. I cant believe Baal been father of the child of Carter... keep goin please, i want to know more. Good job. Bye and Thanks.
Good story lots of interesting twists are you going to continue it?
Good story lots of interesting twists are you going to continue it?
What an interesting story. I don't see how there could possibly be any kind of even semi-happy ending for Jack and Sam, mostly because Jack isn't the original Jack. And if Jack really abandoned Sam when he was given knowledge that she was alive and didn't go to her rescue, she has every right to hate him now. It will be interesting, though, to find out what his reasons were for doing it. And to find out what this mysterious business during the last couple of weeks before SG1's final mission where Jack wouldn't listen to what Sam's fears about the mission might be. I really find it hard to believe that he could be so hateful that he left her for dead. Anyway, PLEASE continue this story. I would really like to read what happens. Thanks
Oh its SO good!!! Please Please Please finish it! I totally love how you've set up the story, and it's very rich in angst....it has SO much potential...please keep writing!!