oh how sad. i did like it tho, very well written
good story. i never really thought about it from kaleb's point of view!
i liked this story very much, you captured the characters wonderfully!
quite an interesting look on their point of views. good writing!
pretty good so far!
Author's Response: thanks, I'm working on the part II right now
good story. i always thought the whole kanaan thing was rushed, why spend three seasons with john/teyla and then all of sudden have a new guy?! i liked your explanation.